Poetry - Snowball Bushes - David Hightower
free verse - Americana - Appalachian - gardening - family - environment
SNOWBALL BUSHES
Three plain sisters
a head and a half high,
old maids, wide as the years
can make them.
They stand side by side
obstinate, drab green, arms folded.
All year I see them
as obstacles to detour around
as I mow, or walk or cut wood
until I begin to envy
the efficiency of straight lines.
I am considering my chainsaw’s
simple stuttering solution
when spring with a wave of the sun
drapes them in gowns of white;
they hold bouquets of full moons
that glow in the night.
My chainsaw sputters itself to silence
as I return it to its shelf.
“Excuse me,” I say as I pass by
the three plump aunts
holding delicate, white gloved hands,
girl beautiful in their finery.
Ahhhh...what a heartwarmer, David! Your tender, poetic care for the bushes reminds me of my paternal Grandmother's bush...so beautiful...they really are "snowballs" in the mind of a child. Such a delight to read...
Blessings and Love - Micke
David,
What is pleasing and graceful and natural becomes extraordinarily beautiful and permanent in your gifted writing..."obstacles to detour around" transformed to "three plump aunts...girl beautiful in their finery."
This is exquisite.
John
John
Nature is full of surprises, David, and you've shared this one with us. Those bushes came mighty close to extinction; fortunately, your patience lasted just long enough for their yearly show to begin. Enjoyable!
Connie
Dear David, As usual I like your poem, as I told you before, I learn a lot from your way of writing such a nice poem. Thank you for sharing, Love Emile
Just as "the three plump aunts" are declared "girl beautiful in their finery," so are these superb lines made classically elegant and eloquent by the splendor bestowed upon them through the poet's pen.
When I reached the sinister stuttering of the chainsaw, I thought about the Academy of American Poet's slogan for National Poetry Month 2009, which is: "Dare I disturb the universe?" Here, the temptation was palpable enough but the grace of the poet's pen proved mighty indeed :-) Much gratitude for the sharing,
Hi David, You write with impeccable imagery and metaphor. The old ones are wise if we only listen. Thank you for listening.. :] and sharing... and for putting the chainsaw back. :] Stay strong...
This is my personal inspirational book of poetry. It contains many poems written for family, friends, and relevant life situations. Hopefully you will find some that will encourage and inpsire you in whatever arena you are found in your circle of l
Blessings and Love - Micke
Enjoyed your beautiful
sharing David.
Take care,
Gwendolyn
What is pleasing and graceful and natural becomes extraordinarily beautiful and permanent in your gifted writing..."obstacles to detour around" transformed to "three plump aunts...girl beautiful in their finery."
This is exquisite.
John
John
Connie
Cryssa
Great!
Georg
Peace,
Marcia
When I reached the sinister stuttering of the chainsaw, I thought about the Academy of American Poet's slogan for National Poetry Month 2009, which is: "Dare I disturb the universe?" Here, the temptation was palpable enough but the grace of the poet's pen proved mighty indeed :-) Much gratitude for the sharing,
Aberjhani
In Spirit,
Bear