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Invisible House
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David Hightower - Invisible House - poetry - Appalchian Heritage

Published in the Spring Issue of Appalachian Heritage


Invisible House

Few give the old homesite a glance,
just a small hill in a large pasture,
gazing down on the sparse traffic
of Dry Creek Road.
It is invisible even to memory;
its existence known only in tales
passed down to scattered descendants.
In summer cows graze
its lush green roof.
In fall flocks of birds migrate
through its walls.
In winter cold rain floods
through transparent rooms.
It is only in spring
that the unseen house hints its presence.
Cars begin to slow,
occupants swivel their heads and marvel.
Emerged from bulbs sprouted eighty years ago,
daffodils in their hundreds
explore the suddenly yellow hill
searching for the hand that planted them.


 

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 Reviews of "Invisible House"
Reviewed by Richard Atwood
Reviewed on June 18, 2011
Precise and clear, no wasted words, and a world of images.
Bravo.
Rick A.

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on June 18, 2011
David, you have a way of transcending the description that is a rare gift. Those last four lines are wonderful indeed.

Axilea

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on May 31, 2011
THE IMAGERY IN THIS WORK IS JUST WONDERFUL. IT'S LIKE A LOVELY PAINTING THAT MAKES ONE WISH THEY COULD ACTUALLY GET TO SEE IT. WELL DONE AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Alain Gracio
Reviewed on May 29, 2011
Original and pleasant to read!

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on May 29, 2011
Like the sensual pleasures of blossoms in Spring and the harmony of birds sweet songs your words drift into a cohesive panorama to feast my imagination on David. Too long it has been since you graced the den with your work my dear friend. I dig you love and peace. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on May 29, 2011
Hi David, it's a great pleasure to be reading you again.
Invisible House is superb writing in every way. -gene.

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on May 28, 2011
He's back!
Much relief to see you, David,
i thought we'd all lost out.
Your trademark calmness and certainty
of expression are in every phrase here
evoking so much in the reader.

John

ps: i will write 'safari' soon
jf

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on May 28, 2011
Enjoyed this very much. Vivid imagery and poetical expertize.

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on May 28, 2011
Gorgeous imagery here (not surprising, it is definitely one of your trademarks), but there's much more than that; there's atmosphere: thick and tangible awe. Also, there's plenty of assonance loosely planted within the walls of your poem. Take the first three lines for instance. Note the short "a" sound in "glance", "pasture", and "traffic", not to mention the inner assonance of "old" next to "homestead", and the slanting rhymes of "small" with "hill". It's sounds like that that make your poetry such a pleasure to read outloud-- like butter-- so delicious...

Your biggest fan. --Charlie

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on May 28, 2011
I remember your work ... you were Poet of the Year on The Writing Forum a year after I was. As I recall you threw in the towel and baffled a lot of people. There is a 'Dry Creek Road' just west of 'Silver Lake' in the 'Eastern Sierras'. It's a place my wife and I fish frequently. One can catch their limit in an hour. "searching for the hand that planted them" seems almost a eulogy.

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on May 28, 2011
David, it is so good to see you post your poetry again; it has been missed. This is a gorgeous poem....love it.

Cheers,
Dan


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