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Senseless
by Carin Spirit → (All Poetry by Carin Spirit)
   Rated "PG" by the Author.
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It is not over yet...

 

So......it is my sight,
   that fills you with such spite.

Don't stop there...

What of ....
    the words I did hear
or the stench that filled the air
and fouled my taste, so rot.

Leaving only to feel,
which I won't
Alas, you are not real. (and never were)


The words I write, will hold you tight 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Senseless"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 16, 2010
Deeply emotive, and powerfully expressed; I find this write open to interpretation; it makes me think. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Faye Beaulieu (Reader)
Reviewed on April 14, 2010
Nice work....Loved it!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
Reviewed on March 13, 2010
This one has a powerful punch! Quite deep emotion expressed in few words. Strong and holds your attention! Hugs, Elizabeth

Reviewed by Richard Arrington (Reader)
Reviewed on February 15, 2010
Very good work.

Reviewed by Carol Grace
Reviewed on January 5, 2010
Grabs you and never lets go. Good poem.

Carol

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on December 24, 2009
The line, "alas you were not real. You never were." speaks volumes to me. I hope you have a peaceful and loving Christmas. Bless you, J'nia

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 22, 2009
A real thought provoker, well said, Carin!

May you be blessed with all of God's best
gifts for Christmas and the New Year!

With Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on December 20, 2009
A lot of emotion in this one, Carin'...

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on December 20, 2009
I know a few I could send this to, but, hmmm? that would make me one of them! :)
Getting it written is the easy part, getting those to understand is sometimes, impossible! Good one!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on December 20, 2009
Whew, a lot of anger in this writing. I hope everything works out for the best FOR YOU! Take care.

GOD BLESS
Tony

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on December 20, 2009
I can sense deep emotional feelings at play here. Well done my friend.


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