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dimensions
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opening my eyes, as round as saucers
gasp for a breath, and rub the pain in my chest
I feel the seatbelt, sit back and relax
oh honey, i must have fallen asleep
 


I had the most unsettling dream
it attacked with a weapon I never saw coming
I was drowning in sorrow
in every dimension
 


petting your arm, in reassuring gesture
the radio plays static, I search the glove box
how about a cd, Joe Satriani
“Is there love in space” yeah, that’s a good one
 


number three comes on “Hands in the air”
my foot starts tapping, my head is swaying
pull the car over, let’s get out
air guitar for you, I’ll beat the ground
 


at the Apache riff, we’re tribal dancing
shredding that sorrow back to its hell
our hearts now pumping from the cardio effort
I’m smiling at you, cause in the trunk is a blanket
 


and I don’t know exactly where I am
but off this road, is open pure prairie
lets walk out there indulge in pleasure
under the new moon and make love to each other


 


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 Reviews of "dimensions"
Reviewed by * ashura (Reader)
Reviewed on May 21, 2004
Oh I DO like a happy ending. Nice poem, Debby. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 20, 2004
Wonderful poetry Debby!!

Thanks for the message!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 20, 2004
great ending to a wonderful day and an inspired poem ...

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)
Reviewed on May 20, 2004
Must be some dream. I'd love just to get lost in the middle of nowhere. Well done. Alex

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 20, 2004
Wonderful poem Debby, loved the easy progression
into the sweet finale;-)

Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on May 20, 2004
this reminds me of he Eagles song about a couple in the desert with only stars all around...
I like this work of yours...your segue from a somewhat frightening beginning to the promise of sensual/sexual delight is flawless...well done, Debby


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