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puzzle
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the creator shook the box
then tossed the pieces
onto the table, scattering
them everywhere

each piece, like a person
completes the puzzle
it remains unfinished,
until it is whole

over eons of time
the pieces are sorted
some have edges
some are the middle

through trial and error
the pieces connect
beginning to create the picture

a sorting takes place
of like colors and shapes
some easily slide together

others use force
until they realize
the fit.. just wasn't right

near to the end
the lost are found
and easily fall into place

the completed puzzle
is a beautiful new world
where every hand holds
and they all..make up the whole

then the creator decides
to frame the new beauty
or shatter it again
and put it back in the box


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 Reviews of "puzzle"
Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Reviewed on June 19, 2002
GREAT IMAGERY~`*

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on June 19, 2002
Very creative piece...and i am sure it is only one of the whole puzzle

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on June 18, 2002
Nice write... Love the ending.

Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon
Reviewed on June 18, 2002
I always wondered why I felt disconnected sometimes ~grins~ Great poem!

Reviewed on June 18, 2002
Very creative.

Reviewed by Larry Skahill
Reviewed on June 18, 2002
very nice thought (hope he frames us and keeps us)

Reviewed by Peter Adotey Addo
Reviewed on June 18, 2002
Very true to life ...thank you

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 18, 2002
Wow...I'm impressed...;-) great wisdom wonderful creativity...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 18, 2002
Yes, such a beautiful truth..

Love, Jo

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen
Reviewed on June 18, 2002
and such is my life, scrambled puzzle pieces, thanks for the reminder that there is a higher vision.
josie

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on June 18, 2002
Beautiful write. You are very creative!

Reviewed by angel michael (Reader)
Reviewed on June 18, 2002
so, true...........kinda the reason i keep tattered remains of ole thoughts...

~~michael~~


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