positively speaking with perhaps arrogance I must acknowledge beyond your clouds I see your inherent goodness and worthiness of existence like tulips breaking through the surface spring soil something occurs like the nature of the wind and rain and sun the way becomes easier you feel comfort and reassured until you know your work of art is pure delight and joy click and the light is expressed revealing your inner soul even if its only you who knows the value and worth of your inner portal there is no matter only thoughts creating more words for tomorrows
A lovely read that draws you in like a gentle intake of breath, necessary for life, sustenance and meditation. Click! Love the inclusion of that "buzz" word which is quite a hook and the energy in the flow and feeling. A dream-like quality to this which enhances and transforms our reality. Fabulous progression and on-going point of view. Bless you, Kate xx
This is a soothing write that the reader breathes in from the authours heart and accepts hungrily the words of wisdom that pertain to love and life so well expressed. Sweet.
Fee
These are excellent thoughts Debby. An exceptional poem.
My thoughts ...
One never truly understands the road another has taken, or the struggles one has fought attempting to reach their dreams, or the heartbreaks experienced along the way. One thing I have learned - in my own struggles to break through societal veneers and competitive prejudice - is that if one looks/listens intently enough at/to another, there always seems to be some good that reveals itself after the initial defenses are lowered. More often than not the first, or even second, glance does not reveal this.
Again this was an insightful write that touched me. You are a gifted poetess.
a calming effect came over me while reading these lines, like sitting outside by my fire, or in my favorite swing, my creative places where I get to go anywhere I want and take whomever with me or
women it all alone! :)
Excellent penning!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Potential meets purpose for great accomplishments in the life of a young student.
A young student is interested in learning coding programs. He applies and is rejected because of his age. He does not give up and tries again and is accepted. Eventu
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My thoughts ...
One never truly understands the road another has taken, or the struggles one has fought attempting to reach their dreams, or the heartbreaks experienced along the way. One thing I have learned - in my own struggles to break through societal veneers and competitive prejudice - is that if one looks/listens intently enough at/to another, there always seems to be some good that reveals itself after the initial defenses are lowered. More often than not the first, or even second, glance does not reveal this.
Again this was an insightful write that touched me. You are a gifted poetess.
Light and Wisdom ...
Love Tinka
women it all alone! :)
Excellent penning!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
It acts as a dynamo "positively speaking" to produce wonders on the prairies of freedom.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Elizabeth
Love,
Eileen