memorial birthday (poem) by Debby Rosenberg on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 5, 2007

A nice tribute to all our veterans and family veterans. Am gald you got through a difficult delivery ok and your baby was healthy .. They seem to come at the most inopportune times.........M

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on June 3, 2007

A touching write, a great tribute, enjoyed!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on June 1, 2007

This touched my heart deeply Debby. An incredible tribute to your Baby and to motherhood.

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on June 1, 2007

wow
great story/poem
perfect title and touching

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on May 31, 2007

You have penned a meaningful comparison, Debby. I am happy that the outcome was fine regarding your "baby" who is now all grown up. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Theresa Koch

Reviewed on May 31, 2007

Powerful and insightful piece~`*

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on May 30, 2007

There is nothing in this world that compares to a thankful heart Debby, except the pleasure one receives from a thankful heart honestly expressed. A beautiful sentiment in this write. I am sure that your daughter is quite proud of her Mommy.

Blessings ...
Richard

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on May 29, 2007

FABULOUS!!!! And WHAT a Memorial indeed! Somehow reminds me of the film Armageddon (sorry to be kitsch!) where the hero and heroine are caught up in love-making before Ben Affleck goes off to deal with the impending meteorite that threatens earth's safety... She says: "Baby... do you think there are others who are doing this very thing right now"... and HE says, "Well, I hope so... or what it is we're trying to save??...".... Then Aerosmith and "Don't Wanna Miss A Thing" strikes up, and then I'm crying and then... what the hell am I going on about??? HAPPY BIRTHDAY and what a transformation from a day of mourning into a day of joy... Think my ramble is to say... those who put their lives on the line did so for JUST this reason... to perpetuate the beauty, innocent freedoms and rights to the breath and joys of life! This just got me plum carried away, I is so enthusiastic... Congratulations... you BOTH made it... I sure am glad. LOLOL Kate xx

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 29, 2007

Wonderful offering..was holding my breath till the end waiting to readthe darkerside of this story...but must say I gave a sigh of relieve at the end!!

Happy Birthday to your Girl!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 29, 2007

Beautiully contrasted Debby! Gives much meaning to death birth and the way we perceive it.Happy Birthday to your daughter;-)!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on May 29, 2007

Every home should have someone, even if not family to remind them of him or her on Memorial Day, because all are touched by a soldier.
Georg

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on May 28, 2007

A very delicately correlation that rings some truths.....Enjoyed.

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on May 28, 2007

great personal poeming Debby, glad you and your daughter survived, for you I know this day is truly special, and you made it official
with this great poem

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on May 28, 2007

beautiful!! I love the celebration of life

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten

Reviewed on May 28, 2007

Makes one think about the many similiarities there seems to be in life...
this truly is an honorable way to always remember the ones who didn't make it!
Happy Birthday to your baby~ even though she's 22!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on May 28, 2007

Very heartfelt write and God had his reasons for your difficult birth on a day set aside to remember the brave and the fallen. Well done Debby.

Fee