the beam came through the window and laid itself on the corner of the carpet without a word it beckoned my being arriving like a god-send into the crisp of winter air, snow flurries, and sporadic overcast sky winter days always chilled my hands and cheeks, stiffened joints, and achy knees I sat on the floor upon the carpet where the sunbeam lay and felt its ray wide and warm gently laying me back to fully embrace its comfort I readily surrendered and dreamt of a warm sandy beach gloriously serene a gentle breeze, clear sky I hear young ones playing in the surf they are talking to dolphins then a gull flies over and i comprehend what it says I’m happy opening my eyes the sun beam has moved working its way through the windows and across the room seemingly settling upon your shoulders and casting an aura glow about your crown you look good in the light comfortably soothing to my soul on the floor I stretch then roll closer to your direction
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Reviews of "winter solstice"
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on January 31, 2008
This is really beautiful. It takes me to moments when I, too, have relished the sun's rays through frosted windows while I closed my eyes and imagined warmer days and spring peepers. There's such a sense of comfort and coziness to this poem.
You have expressed some very sweet sentiments via your verses here, Debby. You have shared a special moment most effecitively. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,
Great personification at work here, Debby. Seems that cheeky little sunbeam had arrived early for Valentine's! :)) The first sign of his dealings with me at this time of the year is to tweak the corners of my lips into an upward direction and - hey presto!! - I'm smiling! And he's definitely the best masseur that I know... And YEYEY!!! We're now past the shortest day, so it's all opening up from here... I count the minutes, almost. Love the form you have chosen... it breathes and has a natural relaxant about it somehow... must be the way the lines spill and pull apart... like teasing out those achey muscles! Much life and light to you this New Year, Debby. Thank you, Kate xx
I love winter time; just wish it would stay colder longer, and wish we'd get more in the way of snow; doesn't snow much here in Texas! (At least where WE'RE at!) Very well penned; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
A most beautifully imaged write, Debby, that brings all the senses into play: especially loved "sporadic overcast skies." That was ours, today. Looked just like the photograph! :) Wonderful capture; you bring serenity and warmth in these lines.
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(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
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