immortal creature (poem) by Debby Rosenberg on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Jill curry (Reader)

Reviewed on August 12, 2008

beautiful imagery here ..loved it

Reviewed on July 30, 2008

Hello Debby, I read your poem,"immortal creature" Yes 'some have entertained angels'someone once said.Very beautiful imagery. Please feel free to visit my site here in the "Den"

Reviewed by Art Hernandez

Reviewed on July 27, 2008

Nice work...the etheral energy of existence never leaves, it stays for the usage of our minds...one only has to understand why it exists...

nice work, Debby...

Art Sun...

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on July 12, 2008

Wonderful write, powerful imagery...beautifully written and inspiring indeed! Well done!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on July 5, 2008

..."to walk in the footprints of thoughts before you. . ." LOVE it!!
AND the images you paint Nice rhythm and sound combo, as well! Plus youchose a great way to illustrate the piece -- gorgeous colors weave beautifully into "pillar of white, glowing edges of blue, golden
orbs. . .' Very tasty! <3 'Pea' <3

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on July 5, 2008

...wonderful words and images you pen...always transport us...a journey of the soul...seen through the human heart...and something more.
John

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on June 29, 2008

The spiritual longing in this drips like moisture in a cave

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on June 19, 2008

Stuble, the quality of being human opens many horizans. You have captured much with this beautiful poem....M

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on June 18, 2008

Love the first stanza especially. Your karmic being always swells within your words to leave us with far more than the mere lingering of idea or sentiment. I love the way you inhabit your concepts and ideas. Bless you, Kate xx

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on June 18, 2008

I love the way you share your "worlds" via your verses, Debby. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on June 18, 2008

Like a magic carpet ride through a world of vibrancy and dreams you weave this story into something special. Your writes always set the mind/heart to spinning with images from another place.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 17, 2008

I love the realms you take us to with your splendid poems Debby!Beautifully written! ET

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on June 17, 2008

ah, nicely done, debby. if only we could all just focus on embracing our humanness...
beautifully inspired write.
peace,
carolyn

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on June 17, 2008

I was about to say the same thing Gianetta said...so we'll leave it there.

Peace,
Dan

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)

Reviewed on June 17, 2008

I always look forward to your posts. It feels like being transported to a different place, yet one that is not unfamiliar. Rather, it is a place from where we were all strewn and where we might, once again, find home.

Reviewed by Lois Christensen

Reviewed on June 17, 2008

Golden orbs disperse to everyone, as I know yellow cheers and is so bright. This is a brightly shining poem and I agree with George in the eternity beyond the eternity.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on June 17, 2008

"...glowing edges of blue..." like standing on the sky's end feeling the elation when the eyes see forever, the eternity beyond the eternity...then is when the creature knows its own immortality.
A brilliant poem!

Georg

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on June 16, 2008

How soothing and appealing to the true sprit of the soul as one ponders the greatness and vastness of being human....

Be always safe,
Karen