Love the image and your interpretation of it, Debbie. Time is NOW indeed! The past only serves to direct us from NOW, the continuum that we live in, to the future - like an arrow. But our trajectory of flight is always NOW! :)) xx I know that EST is -5hrs to my GMT and it's extraordinary how the two marry up in experiential practice, like for like. Time is but a figment of our imagination and an arbitrary measure of experience. Love this! xx
Wow, quite a calvalcade of emotion as I read your poem..I love Jude's acronym of NOW, nourishing our wits, perfect description of what your poem does to your reader!
Peace, love and light,
Amber
Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on January 28, 2012
I feel like I've just been made to jump through a loop... er, uh, I mean hoop... reminds me of an old REM song called "Man in the Moon" ... the line "Mott the Hoople and the Game of Life. Yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah..." a few more loops and this hole I'm digging for my credibility will swallow me up as sure as I love fruit loops! Now where was I? Oh yes, back there where you sit writing this poem. Thanks for including me in your creative process. Very creative of you to imagine an ideal reader for your ideal poem! I'm looking for the bookmark feature right after I get out of this endless loop your poem seems to have created... needless to say, it's driving me a little loopy. Ah, well.. even we low-flying planes can pull out of a loop-dee-loop if we over-correct strenuously enough... if there are no objections, from those who are reading this NOW, that is. :)
This book consists of a 150 pages of Christian poetry about the end of time and the Second coming of Jesus Christ not as a servant but as a King, the King of kings. To bring righteousness and peace to the earth and restore the government of God! Peac
In "A Touch of Your Presence" are words that would inspire, encourage and strengthen one's soul when faced with challenges and difficulties and to know the awesomeness of God's power.
Peace, love and light,
Amber
Peace always, and be well.
Roger
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