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naturally
by Debby Rosenberg → (All Poetry by Debby Rosenberg)
  
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a meeting down south a three hour commute
i ignore the traffic and everyone's fumes
and gaze upon the earthly landscape
lush is the green on every hillside
in love with the terrain of stately mountain
wildflowers grow along the banks
everything stretching its head to the sun
reminding me of natural beauty formed

i wonder sometimes
why i notice these things
and how natural beauty
makes me weak in the knees

arriving home i fill the tub
lavender scented to soak away
what has been a very long day
my clothes in a pile i'll deal with later
this moment of naked i wish to savor

i see your smile i'm mesmerized
truly delighted
for heaven has sent me an angel so warm
i could never walk this earth and ever feel alone
the beauty you are is so enchanting
to cause within me that natural feeling

towel dried i brush out my hair
fold back the blankets and slide in bare
turn down your side invite you to stay
for you are naturally an element today








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 Reviews of "naturally"
Reviewed on April 2, 2003
Excellent, clever write.

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on April 1, 2003
Clever!!!
and romantic

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on April 1, 2003
enjoyed very much
wonderful write

William

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on April 1, 2003
okay oddball that I am sounds haunted with a ghostly loverLOL but very relaxing and sensual and beutiful nice job on this peom

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on April 1, 2003
Debbie, well done.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 31, 2003
soothing, beautiful poem! no better way to end the day ;)

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on March 31, 2003
Enjoyed reading this--especially like that ending!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 31, 2003
Deb, you have such a natural talent and ease for this kind of write , this feels wonderful, reads pretty good too;-)

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on March 31, 2003
Debtowel dried i brush out my hair
fold back the blankets and slide in bare
turn down your side invite you to stay
for you are naturally an element today by,"
nice way to end the day!!!!
Peg
fresh and beautiful........
"

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on March 31, 2003
Debbie, this is a wonder.
Bravo, well done.


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