the paths did cross
to grow our souls
to provide something
the other knows
the very thing we need to grow
is mysteriously translucent
and deep within despairing thoughts
weakness becomes our strength
you make me squirm
with heavenly discomfort
follow the heart and follow the cause
and what if the heart is the cause
I reach for your hand and fall anyway
those moments of beauty help me hold on
those moments of despondent I slip away
I really don't want to hit the pavement
so I gather strength becoming vapor
because the spirit doesn't splatter
but floats instead to the light
maybe a blessing maybe a curse
you see it go down with a mind of its own
after I write I go back and read it
often wondering the perception
that you wake me up inside
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Reviews of "evanescence"
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on May 5, 2003
Some powerful strength in this piece, as well as haunting realizations of reality...Excellant Work!
~Nikki~
you don't vanish with this one Debby, you appear as the wind with a message from your creative mind~and it's excellent
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on May 4, 2003
My daughter just took a photo shoot with these people, and then rocked out to the concert, oh to be young and stupid.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on May 4, 2003
Debby,
"I really don?t want to hit the pavement
so I gather strength becoming vapor
because the spirit doesn?t splatter
but floats instead to the light
maybe a blessing maybe a curse
you see it go down with a mind of its own
after I write I go back and read it
often wondering the perception
that you wake me up inside "
your unique style and class and depth
I love this one superb.
Peggy
Married ten years, and more in love than ever, Robert and Marcie have everything to live for. But a terrible secret is breaking Robert's heart: he knows that Marcie is about to die...
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~Nikki~
Excellent
William
to grow our souls
to provide something
the other knows
the very thing we need to grow
is mysteriously translucent..."
Love those lines. Well done.
Dove ~
I don't know this group
My word! many of them
I don't know.........
Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$
"I really don?t want to hit the pavement
so I gather strength becoming vapor
because the spirit doesn?t splatter
but floats instead to the light
maybe a blessing maybe a curse
you see it go down with a mind of its own
after I write I go back and read it
often wondering the perception
that you wake me up inside "
your unique style and class and depth
I love this one superb.
Peggy