Me And My Goldfish (poem) by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel) on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on December 9, 2019

Reminds me of the cat I used to have. Freedom comes in many forms. My cat chose to ignore me.

Reviewed on December 7, 2019

Actually, this poem provokes thought, and I like the way you personified the goldfish. Nicely done, Sandie. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis. 💐🌸🌺🌻🌼

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on December 1, 2018

THE GOLDFISH COULD NO MORE LIVE NATURALLY IN OUR ENVIRONMENT THEN WE COULD LIVE IN ITS ENVIRONMENT. DIFFERENT WORLDS...FOR DIFFERENT FOLKS, AMEN! THANKS FOR SHARING, SANDIE. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on May 27, 2014

An interesting thought - how would we feel inside that bowl? But perhaps we are all in a bowl of our own.

Reviewed by Emile Tubiana

Reviewed on May 26, 2014

Excellent poem. Nothing is better than the freedom. Thank you for sharing.

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on May 25, 2014

A kool write Sandie most enjoyable reading
Thumbs up on your bio picture
Love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Connie Faust

Reviewed on May 25, 2014

Just like a strong-willed child. MYOB, even on the outside of the fishbowl, looking in. Very cute!
I have to mention that your bio picture is beautiful!

Connie

Reviewed by E Phillips

Reviewed on May 25, 2014

Was that fish taunting you or begging you? :-)

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on May 25, 2014

I think you've got my point, Roseline! Even the goldfish has a mind of its own. You just can't will it to entertain you each time you need to be entertained in the manner you want it to entertain you. The life belongs to the goldfish itself, and does not belong to us.

Sandie

Reviewed by J. Roseline

Reviewed on May 24, 2014

Lovely thoughtful write, yes we like to enjoy all that we create as if it is our birth right that they entertain us, serve us....Jk

Reviewed by D.T. de Bruijn

Reviewed on May 24, 2014

Hahaha very funny! Maybe he needs a companion in there, so they can make fun of you together :) That big human with her funny questions. Thanks, Sandie! Very fun write. Grtz, D.T.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 24, 2014

just drizzle a little food on top and he'll be your best friend ...

Reviewed by Clarence Prince

Reviewed on May 24, 2014

Perhaps the little goldfish was saying
for asking such a question
you need to leave me alone.
It's really funny, Sandie!

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on May 24, 2014

When you can start communing with a goldfish, you'll be the winner of Canada's got talent!

Ron

Reviewed by May Yu (Reader)

Reviewed on May 24, 2014

Perhaps goldfish ALWAYS looked surprise because lives in a glass house, and people should already know how it feels without asking.

Cute pic of the goldfish! So funny!

May

Reviewed by John Dyhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on May 24, 2014

an amusing and fun little ditty, with perhaps a serious message?

Reviewed by Michael Schafer

Reviewed on May 24, 2014

If that fish had answered you, I'd be very concerened.
Michael D.