I wrote this a short while back and is one of my favourites, yet it has the lowest reads of all my poems. A friend suggested it was the title so I have made a few minor changes and renamed it.
My apologies and thanks if you already read it as 'Walking'
Singing from birds far distance flown light steps through barley mown butterflies flutter on gentle breeze what is it that my nostrils tease air perfumed from flowers' scent? if paradise be true , this surely meant could Mother Nature's perfect touch alone speed my heart this much more likely the woman by my side not wonders like hay fresh dried at her that my loving eyes do stare her hands fighting wind swept hair her beaming smile so genuine and true as countryside joy we stroll through lay down beneath the green leafed tree enjvista laid out so beautifully above more birds all grace and fleet tranquil serenity surely never be beat Yet I ride higher than this ideal as with our bodies our love we seal
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Reviewed by Catherine N (Reader)
Reviewed on July 26, 2003
Beautiful write..Definately "Perfect Love"! I can feel the magnetism in it!!
'Perfect Love' is beautiful and a more expressive title for this particular poem. (I wish my cat would keep her tail off my keyboard!) It is lovely David.
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~Nikki~
Never rest your pen; don't let your quills dry, as long as you live.
"Perfect Love" enriches the pages of Poetry twenty-first century, touches and inspires my soul.
May you enjoy a long healthy Life.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
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