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Perfect Love
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I wrote this a short while back and is one of my favourites, yet it has the lowest reads of all my poems. A friend suggested it was the title so I have made a few minor changes and renamed it.

My apologies and thanks if you already read it as 'Walking'


Singing from birds far distance flown
light steps through barley mown
butterflies flutter on gentle breeze
what is it that my nostrils tease
air perfumed from flowers' scent?
if paradise be true , this surely meant
could Mother Nature's perfect touch
alone speed my heart this much
more likely the woman by my side
not wonders like hay fresh dried
at her that my loving eyes do stare
her hands fighting wind swept hair
her beaming smile so genuine and true
as countryside joy we stroll through
lay down beneath the green leafed tree
enjvista laid out so beautifully
above more birds all grace and fleet
tranquil serenity surely never be beat

Yet I ride higher than this ideal
as with our bodies our love we seal


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 Reviews of "Perfect Love"
Reviewed by Catherine N (Reader)
Reviewed on July 26, 2003
Beautiful write..Definately "Perfect Love"! I can feel the magnetism in it!!

Reviewed on July 24, 2003
Glad I stopped by. This is a nice rhyming poem and a pleasure to read. G

Reviewed by Jackie Brooks
Reviewed on July 23, 2003
'Perfect Love' is beautiful and a more expressive title for this particular poem. (I wish my cat would keep her tail off my keyboard!) It is lovely David.

Reviewed on July 23, 2003
Oh, how I love the countryside.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on July 23, 2003
This is beautiful and worth a repost!

Reviewed by The Gentle Man
Reviewed on July 23, 2003
David, this is very well done and I do agree with the title change....smile Thanks for re-posting!

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on July 23, 2003
David dearest this is GORGEOUS, filled with such beautiful and magnificent imagery, am so glad you reposted this!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on July 23, 2003
Passion at it's finest! I'm with you,,,I like this one alot! Great write David,,~SH~

Reviewed on July 23, 2003
You, Poet, let your heart synchronize wonders, and the scent of life gave color to the ink used to write "Perfect Love".

Never rest your pen; don't let your quills dry, as long as you live.

"Perfect Love" enriches the pages of Poetry twenty-first century, touches and inspires my soul.

May you enjoy a long healthy Life.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on July 23, 2003
Serenely sweet prose!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 23, 2003
Oh this is beautifully romantic David!!

Love
tinka

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on July 23, 2003
Wonderful imagery and beautifully romantic.

~Joseph

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on July 23, 2003
Oh so lovely, wonderful romantic write, David.

Reviewed by Erica DeLano (Reader)
Reviewed on July 23, 2003
This truly is beautiful. Sometimes something we write will have a deep meaning to us that all do not see.. I can see why this is a favorite.

Reviewed on July 23, 2003
Wondering why anyone would not want to Walk along this perfect beauty...

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on July 23, 2003
I'm glad you've posted it again because it's absolutely beautiful.
~Chrissie


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