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Moments
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Moments With Inspirations... Looking Into Sarah's Basin (she is a garden statue)
http://www.AuthorsDen.com/adstorage/68762/Moments.wma Moments The valley called from an echo; Starving fields of love from wings- Blue eyes nestled like sapphires; Birthing life upon broken dreams- Build the dams of bridges born; Lumbers visit the resting night- When dreams awake thunders call; Press your heart to freedoms flight… Open gates of vowing promise; See reflections drift in charcoals dust- Wash redemptions like ole memories; Paving the love of desires mullein must- Listen to the coarse elevations calling; Those crimson choices of stolen timbre- Where meaning dreams are upon a star; the only moments your soul can remember… (Written: August 16^th, 2009 9:00 p/m) In Joy, In Peace, In Grace, In Harmony of Love Embraced ~ Embrassé poétesse d'amour ~ poétesse romantique Copyright© 2009 Poetess Victoria L. McColley *http://stores.lulu.com/poetessvictoriamccolley* http://www.AuthorsDen.com/adstorage/68762/Moments.wma

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on September 19, 2009

Vickie, your passion embraces the words and the moment -- from that place new meaning falls gently onto my ears -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on September 3, 2009

BEAUTIFULLY DONE...EMBRACING LOVE THAT COMES IN MOMENT. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS YOU. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on August 18, 2009

Just love your graphics! Always such sublime beauty in your words...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Victoria, your style and passion shines throughout this beautiful poem. A lovely piece of work, and I shall save this one to my library to read again!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by David cox (Reader)

Blue eyes nestled like sapphires;

Birthing life upon broken dreams-

what an amazingly beautifull phrase these beautiful orbs of dazzling blue witnessing the rise of new beginings like a phoenix rising from the ashes.
taking you on a new adventure into the future.
simplly beutifull vickie! simply beautifull.
may your broken dreams all rise renewed and may your new journeys be amazing,
stay happy my friend.
Dave.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley

Reviewed on August 17, 2009

BEAUTIFUL. . . . . .
JUST BEAUTIFUL.

DOUG

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Victoria,
Your images are excellent and your phrasing and word choices are superior and rich. Fine fine writing.

John

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Very moving and powerful as it resounds off the mountains and into the heart...well done.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

...those echo's of the valley...I feel like I hear them calling as I read this gem of a poem...moving write Victoria!
Christine

Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)

reading your poetry only makes us want to know you more-excellent

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Your choice of font only enhances the
rhythm and message of this. And the mention
of mullein, in my opinion, is a beautiful metaphor
for the velvet textures of these loving thoughts.
Blessings ...

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante

very beautiful and romantic, some unique images

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Blue eyes nestled like sapphires on a delicate ivory oval of a beautiful and serene face...
You inspire!

Georg

Reviewed by George Carroll

Splendid poetry.