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Love's Calm
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May the Bounties of Peace & Serenity embrace the bestowals of Your Soul …no matter any restive turbulence’s…
Photography Artist: Bowie15 http://www.dreamstime.com/Bowie15_info Love’s Calm Vitriolic stones of permanence; Cast into a pool of love’s water… Ruthless destruction ponders; Uttering derisions buoyant scorn… Acerbic shores ripple of mordant pebbles; Rancorous dejections of emotionality grow… Collecting dark contemptuous minerals; Where voiding caustic corrosions intercede as one… Implacable currents are scathing corrosive memories; Derisively binding to satirical lesions of exuviations molt… Seeking whence a heart left marked by sardonic shorelines; Undulating the torrents nefariously cynical waves in silence… Yet swelling in this deigning pool of love’s intrepid waters, a quiet current of surging stillness rests patiently within… Knowing those plundering stones and pebbles as vital meaning; Dispersing mettle valiances into the fusion of quickening sand… Collecting cohesions on that sardonically cursive shoreline; Knowing permanence is also a defining belief of love’s integral purity; Flowing effortlessly through an impermeable presence of embowered faith; She restfully knows without demurrals inductive questions- Love’s calm devotionally awaits to enter the crasis of her sinuous pool… (Written: August 28^th, 2009 1:06 p/m) In Joy, In Peace, In Grace, In Harmony of Love Embraced ~ Embrassé poétesse d'amour ~ poétesse romantique Copyright© 2009 Poetess Victoria L. McColley *http://stores.lulu.com/poetessvictoriamccolley*

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on August 30, 2009

Vicky, it was not calm before the storm, but a tongue lashing of "vitriolic stones" with "rancorous dejections" and "corrosive memories" expressed in "sardonic shorelines" and then...then it was "sinuous pool love's calm" and I wonder, with ecstasy.

Georg

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on August 29, 2009

...A WORK FULL OF THE MARVELOUS PHRASES THAT TUMBLE SO SMOOTHLY AND ELEGANTLY FROM THE GIFT THAT THE 'GIFT GIVER' HAS PLACED INSIDE OF YOU. THANKS SO MUCH FOR SHARING. GOD BLESS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Vickie,
The "quiet current of surging stillness" holds fast and stills the turbulence of our souls, of our lives. I love where you go with this and how I follow.

John

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

That photo alone is soothing and your words are calming and anything to do with the ocean has to be perfect Vickie. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Soothing as the beat of a soft summer rain on a warm day...loved it.
fee

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

..I have always loved...pebbles,stones,rocks, they are in themselves calming, even in a fountain...but take me to an ocean, oh my I am in heaven..tranquil write :)
Christine

Reviewed by George Carroll

How sweet and calm is this devotional hymn to the vagaries of love. Love the pic which sets the dream sequence of this delightful poem.

Reviewed by D Johnson

Indeed, a sweet calm blankets love. Great picture to!

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

She restfully knows without demurrals inductive questions-

Love’s calm devotionally awaits to enter the crasis of her sinuous pool…

Indeed. Love like a healing balm; would that it were so. Thank you, Vickie. Love and hugs,

Regis