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Dormant Pain
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~Dark Poetry October~ and now the grooming of appearances lurking inside temptations; delving within the dark muse of poetic expressionism; revealing shadows of emotive ideas... She is deeply brutally hungered for a ravenous escort to Swedish Castle...perhaps you are free to be delivered? All Emotions Paid in Lust!
Photography Artist: ‘lady-atroops http://lady-atropos.deviantart.com/ Dormant Pain scab of miser prodding looking behind the back of doors lost inside the pebbles of vengeance scathing the stairs for whores but deemed to break those mirrors the closets of vulgarity live hidden within its martyr where no truth offers to give locks of weighted anguish stolen innocence betrayed hailing a self righteous vision beneath traverse lusting trade silently slithering into nightmares where no escape toils a curse bound to know suffocation emotions ride in the torpid hearse for death found the quietus where love searched in vain the wicked with their insanity and their mirrors of dormant pain (Written: October 6^th, 2009 12:54 p/m) Dark Poetry October 2009 In Anguish, In Vengeance, In Menace, In Discordance of Lust… Copyright© 2009 Dark Romantic Poetess Victoria L. McColley http://stores.lulu.com/poetessvictoriamccolley Sincerely Bound By Incantations, Poetess Victoria...The Dark Pestilence of Romance Archaic Mistress of Caliginous Temptations

Reviewed by dan Rosenhagen

Reviewed on November 4, 2009

Dormant pain.............
Sometimes it is the conscious mind
becoming unconscious to what
they really are. A delema that could
fester dormant pain.
This write speaks the wisdom of your
depth, a talant not at all dormant:)

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler

Reviewed on November 1, 2009

Interesting pic and poetry to match. Hugs, J'nia

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 30, 2009

Apt, timely, and very effectively dark, Vickie. Nicely done! Love, hugs, and best wishes,

Regis

PS: I love your bio photo.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Another great dark and wicked write with a character guarenteed to heat up the blood before she sips it in a caesar or a bloody Mary drink of the palace.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Soul flagellation and burning thoughts of a Witch claiming to have corrupted a betrayed innocence using torpid emotions, as even we hear her dragging chains wanted to come upon us unnoticed through darkness...

Georg

Reviewed by Ray { The Great Canadian Buzzard }

I want my innocence back, do you know who stole it? :)
Buzzard

Reviewed by George Carroll

You portray the anguish in the darkness of the soul. The pic is the mirror reflecting in intense longing.