it is laid out there for all of us to view -- no deceptions, no subtle innuendo, it is the real you -- a heart and soul as big as any can be -- and it is wonderful -- peace and love my dear friend --Jon Michael

Very nicely done. Hugs, J'nia

The sparrow sing...like a soul in a cocoon of feathers giving voice to a little dream, your poem should had been told in a peaceful Japanese garden to someone tenderly loved.

Georg

Well I have followed your work from the first time I saw you post here on the den and I said it then and I repeat...your talent is immense but your soul is immeasurable when it comes to poetry...Very nicely done Vick.
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Vickie, Love is showing your full self and trusting that person
without reservation, "her name is Love"...your poetry brings our lives together, for 'we' are on your pages.
Always,
Deborah

The writing's on the wall. Calligraphy belongs out of the closet in full view of love's translator competing with the ebullient birdsong. Interpretation is smoked out, through bamboo, spice, incense, herbal tea, chimes and India ink, what we have here is a rite of passage...Romantic Poetess Victoria L. McColley crosses over to a marketable genre, a spillover of her alternative enticements. In evolutionary terms, The Sparrows Sing represents ancient lineage arriving under Nature's canopy of diversity. This work suggests it has existed for thousands of years and now has been brought to Light under new circumstances...[Sage Sweetwater, Celebrity Firebrand Lesbian Novelist]

To see a reflection with such clarity is a time to rejoice, stunning work once again Victoria, I hear a sparrow singing
Happy Thanksgiving
Christine

Another outstanding piece of writing Vicky. Enjoyed.

Oh Victoria, this is heavenly! I love the format and the photo is stunning. Much peace, light and LOVE, my dear spirit sister,
May you have the blessings from the Universe this Thanksgiving.
Amber "V"

The pulse quickens at the approach of your work...
Then slows without thought- carried on the spell you weave...
Until I land...
Home.
Smile as I return your deposit slip.

John