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THE UNDERTOW
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And here within this metaphysical lesbianism proffer
I offer my poetic visionary her vociferous freedom of expression
Creatively into this...cast ripples…
embracing reflections through Poseidon’s aftermath...clarity…

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The Undertow
Relieved of torrent burdens surge
an escapade crosses the vital stream.
Moving in the waters are rapidity
unseen currents of tides undertow…
 
Where no dwerger dare wander
…less the tepidity of thorns wail;
Least under moon beams spiral stair
the marred stars are a paretic alter…
This premise of shaded dark reprieve
where faint visions will etch their self
upon the love of the descrying heart…
 
A voice will be whispered in silence;
The wet plunge of submersion sink-
and there in the bottom of the shallows,
the breadth of merciless time resides;
ensuring matters of the visionary soul…
 
Offering the life of inner balms buried;
to reach from the grave of darkness,
to flow…with currents of the undertow…
 
 
(Written: November 25th, 2009 10:05 a/m)
 
In Joy, In Peace, In Grace, In Harmony of Love
Embraced ~ Embrassé
poétesse d'amour ~ poétesse romantique
Copyright© 2009 Poetess Victoria L. McColley
 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "THE UNDERTOW"
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on January 5, 2010
the undertow is passionate and the never ending cycle offers questions eternal -- Vickie, your work her is intense and of great art -- peace and love my dear friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on December 3, 2009
I wear headphones, adjusted the volume and you whispered in my ears all about The Undertow...

Georg


Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on December 2, 2009
Vickie,
This writing is of the highest order, eloquent, erudite, rich and passionate.

John

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on December 2, 2009
..OFFERING THE LIFE OF INNTER BALMS BURIED; TO REACH FROM THE GRAVE OF DARKNESS, TO FLOW...WITH CURRENTS OF THE UNDERTOW. I AM REMINDED OF 'HIS' WORD WHICH SAYS...'IS THERE NO BALM GILDEAD...?" WE SEEK FOR 'BALM' FROM EVERYWHERE EXCEPT.... THANKS FOR SHARING THIS VERY WELL DONE WORK. BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on December 2, 2009
...speaking of undertows you swallowed me whole in this beauty...and I listened to your words as well..stunning Vickie!
Christine

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on December 2, 2009
I'm amazed at your command of poetic syntax. Stunning!

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on December 2, 2009
Ah Vick as always you blend imagery, and wordplay with soul and heart to offer your readers all the best of this thing we call prose...well done but I would expect nothing less.
fee

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on December 2, 2009
Fragrant with wetness...woman, wood and feather. Sensually, a ponderous flow downstream...realizing it's all the same water having made the journey downstream countless times after returning to the original preference. The recite, Victoria L. McColley, what a lovely Voice, inspired, paced with direction, THE UNDERTOW, loved by those who know what it is. My slow waters press against her tide.

Love,
Sage

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on December 2, 2009
Victoria, Just beautifully stated.
Love,
DeB

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on December 2, 2009
You had me from the title.
The ocean is verility- pricked- it bleeds our dreams.
Awesome imagery- catching my breath here.

John


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