Enervate Crime (poem) by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse on AuthorsDen

Enervate Crime
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Rated "G" by the Author.

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"The prisoner is not the one who has committed a crime, but the one who clings to his crime and lives it over and over.” Henry Miller
Enervate Crime Disparity bore into the veins of slothful challenges, like a gathering of chided thieves harried in respite. Somnolently hovering over trophy’s stolen treasures, languidity drifts in thoughts upon the stillness of time. Motions are unseen by the reality of tomorrow’s brow; as equality sat in the light of obvious diversions lure. Just waiting for compilations of greed’s arriving seduction; the next victim of corridor’s inadequate calescent echo remains… Spineless details sprawling cowards ineffectual errands; The morph preoccupied with reasons of his enervate crime; Buries inside the fractures of his mind his masked secrets; Bludgeoned by the inefficiencies of his true identity… (Written: December 14th, 2009 6:12 a/m) In Joy, In Peace, In Grace, In Harmony of Love Embraced ~ Embrassé poétesse d'amour ~ poétesse romantique Copyright© 2009 Poetess Victoria L. McColley

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on December 15, 2009

Gives deposition to interrogatory, questioning "did you do it?"...this one eats at the perpetrator, and his gut swells with guilt he cannot live down...weakening this character into his own grave...Confession is a powerful force to reckon with, even more so than denial...because one has to face the scene of the crime over and over again, the details, the blood, the bludgeoning, the gunshot litter, the flesh ripped from the soul...it's good to envision this, Victoria...a healing interwreathe intertwining with truth and forgiveness...Enervate Crime would do well in a recital for Homicide 101 Classroom Psychology studies...deep path to self-acceptance and healthy mental "door" frame of mind...this is good...

Love,
Sage

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

"...somnolently hovering over trophy’s stolen treasures..." and some will linger forever in that twilight where light is not light and shadows aren't shadows, like hovering on a limbo...

Georg

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Criminals prefer to hide behind facades and shadows, mostly I suppose to evade detection by authourities but also I think in a sense of shame. Shame that there downfallings lead them to commit acts that society finds loathsome.
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