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Her Puissant Soul
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in 1983 a Romanian woman I was visiting on Christmas showed me some sort of holy bread she had saved in her Christmas offerings. (in a special box) The bread was flat like in this photo, but charred like a perfect flour tortilla. All I remember is it tasted very bland dry and it was very brittle. But also she had it for a long time. (hemin bread maybe?) She told me it was the last of her sacred bread and she offered me a piece. She told me to open my mouth for blessings. Anyway This Poem Is Dedicated to you Charlotte...and Your Puissant Soul
Her Puissant Soul Altruistic pathways are chiseled in love’s permanence. Continuums of these sacral truths refining pool’s ripple are ceremonial marmorean stones endowering regality within stillness. Ebullitions of moldering calamities evermore abandon into motet pathways. Arising to know virtue’s sangfroid offertory, victuals of breaded faith are placed peaceably upon the pursing lips of her puissant soul… (Written: May 27^th, 2010 6:00 p/m) © Poetess Victoria L. McColley (TWEET TWEET)

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on May 30, 2010

Vickie, as Felix, Georg and Dan elude to, this certainly appears to have been a communal type of bread and the ceremony, or rite of passage similar to. From what you have related in your poem, this was a significant event for you, as your recollections of the event are clear. A rendering that plants seeds of questioning. I enjoyed it very much. May peace and love be always with you my dear friend. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on May 29, 2010

yes as Georg said it soes sound like a type of communion, so many religions have common denominators such as communion bread or special foods and drinks.
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Reviewed by Debra Baker

Reviewed on May 28, 2010

Vicki
A new passage of strong words expressing offerage and acceptence without ponder of thought...destine to be best account of this poem...
Love you Sweetie...

Reviewed by D Johnson

After reading your poem two times I came up with these words from the bible. "Do this in remembrace of me."

I really like what you wrote.

Now if you'll excuse me I need to look up some very unfamiliar words.
Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

It makes me to think about communion...and a secret place in our hearts.

Georg