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Aphrodesia Perfume
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dappled across her wrist she place Krisna musk rubbed gently from the cup of carved stones...
Aphrodesia Perfume Her choric voice induces echoic songs throughout time's ceremonial garden. From the holy temples where she places Indian basil oils and her fresh jessamine petals, her patriarchal essence emits through eternality's alter perfusing numinous depths claiming herself upon my soul as her aphrodesia perfume reaches across wild meadows cascading her wisdom through the dance of lepidopterous wings I listen with dissilient knowing to the modality of her visions. Born through descension's descrying eyes I am witness to her songs of spiritual worship rooted through ecclesiastical fulfillment's where empyreal emotions deeply reside... (Written: July 4th, 2010 7:55 a/m) © Poetess Victoria L. McColley

Reviewed by David Maclellan

Reviewed on July 6, 2010

Absolutely breathtaking Victoria! The scent lingers as I read...
David

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on July 5, 2010

Victoria, as always you sweep me along on
the rhythms of your spirited language. -gene.

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Infused with such olfactorous spirituality and distilled nature's abundance anointing pillars and obelisks regenerative of body, mind and soul...

Love,
Sage

Reviewed by Joyce White

Beautiful, very lyrical, almost like a song. Love, Joyce

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

...but the fingers top knows...

Georg

Reviewed by Andy Turner

Reviewed on July 4, 2010

No idea why, or maybe I lie, but this makes me think of my fav chick lit by liz gilbert. EPL.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

wow, can smell the aromas and almost hear a chanted prayer,,, well done Vic
fee

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Vickie, it was the butterfly wings that transported me through the aromatic euphoria of Indian basil oils. Sweet and bitter essence offered in ritual worships. This poem provided me with a dreamy ride into a dreamy dimension. Creative work my dear friend. May peace and love be always with you. Jon Michael

Reviewed by William DeVault

Very lovely, very gently penetrative.

Reviewed by D Johnson

Vickie, I'm not totally sure what you were writing, but I had this really cool, meditational music floating through my headset to my brain and it danced well with your words.

Cheers,
Dan