ROMANTICS: Beneath This Lust (poem) by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on August 2, 2010

This, my dear friend, is one of your best written poems I have read in a long time....I can feel your passion, seduction and lust filled words deeply touching my inner passions..Wow, a tempting bouquet of erotic words forming a magnificent poem!

Much peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on July 29, 2010

Seduction leads me to undress my truths
Endlessly reaching with sensual devotions
Absorbing inside you as I disappear into your kiss
Your erotic soul camouflages me beneath this lust�

I am completely mesmerized and swallowed within the enchanting erotic and passionate power expressed within your verses dear Vickie. My heartrate actually increased as I read. That's got to say something about what you have shared. Thank you. Love, hugs, and very best wishes,

xo Regis

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on July 29, 2010

SENSUAL PHRASES THAT SUPPORT THE THEME SOLIDLY...WELL DONE. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE AND BLESSINGS, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by David cox (Reader)

Reviewed on July 29, 2010

delicious words. very thought provoking and what thoughts they are indeed.
beautifull

dave.

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on July 29, 2010

The power in your words are inhanced by the scent of its poetic flow. Magical, mystical, marvelous.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by David Maclellan

Reviewed on July 29, 2010

Such beautiful and sensual verse Victoria. I can honestly say that I lose myself in your prose,
"You capture my breath inhaling your beauty
Shrouding desires unquenchable thirsts�"
Outstanding lines,
Bless you Vickie,
David

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on July 29, 2010

EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on July 28, 2010

This one is powerfully strong and heady, and I love the ravishing orchid image as well ~
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on July 28, 2010

Vickie, A divine scent...this is a boquet that engulfs one completely..for sure, one of my favorite of yours~

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on July 28, 2010

Ravishing thoughts and words, Vickie, and you return to the orchid again, that most erotic and sensuous of flowers. I love this.

John

Reviewed by Andy Turner

Reviewed on July 28, 2010

Typical bloke. I see lesbian and think what a waste, yet i can still admire your waist.
And if i became gay, does that make me a cute lesbians prey.

Sorry for being so cheap.
You write so divine, it seems like love, not lust.

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on July 28, 2010

Seductive and laden with erotic overtones, mistress...camouflages Beneath This Lust, a query of are they, or are they not? Who lays who in this plane of sensual mystique they wonder...our convenience, their fantasy...knowing what's beneath is to know what timeless passion can earn in means of intimacy...and orgasm...hosted by your sensibilities, received by me, transmittal of truth's admission...does it not smell stronger as its shelf life never expires?

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Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill

Reviewed on July 28, 2010

Beautiful romantic words unwinding shrouded ecstasies for us all to feel. Vickie you are an amazing wordsmith taking my breath away!

Peace and wild wings,
Dayvid