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Discovering Abandon
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spurring into moments...

Discovering Abandon

We were caught
in the rain.
No-one gave notice
to our desires as we danced
alone undressing our bodies
to the soul of freedom…
Feeling penetrated
by the purity of our passion,
absorbing each other
reaching to touch the sky as one;
We cradled our intimacy
with our finger tips tracing
…caressing sensual hungers
 as our hearts began discovering
abandon…

© Poetess Victoria L. McColley 2010

 

 


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 Reviews of "Discovering Abandon"
Reviewed by Paul Judges
Reviewed on November 11, 2010
You have captured the moments of abandon...well written !

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on November 10, 2010
Such a release of energy and true joy, Vickie, in this abandon where cares and caution are put aside and we embrace the moment.
Yes!

John

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on November 10, 2010
Oh my- in the rain...
And I recently wrote a poem called "Lightening."
This is when it strikes- hot- searing- energy.

John

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on November 10, 2010
Gives reason to do a rain dance...

...

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on November 10, 2010
Extremely romantic piece. I would love to try it one time. As always Vicky, top tier.


Namaste
Tony

Reviewed by Chessly Nesci
Reviewed on November 10, 2010
Very romantic!! Love this!! Dancing alone in the rain and undressing your bodies to the soul of freedom...Blessings~ Chessly


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