Surrender (poem) by Dawn Anderson on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on February 4, 2008

wisdom, so much here, acceptance of perpetual change many never grasp...

Reviewed on February 2, 2008

an excellent write Dawn
peace & Love

William

Reviewed on January 29, 2008

This poem shows so much depth...indecision and opportunity are almost like the sky and the sun...as you have shown they go hand in hand. We as individuals have the same emotion it is the change that we are always striving for...

nice work, Dawn...

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on January 28, 2008

Great movement in this piece of writing. The whole poem reflects the idea of change - transition.

Very coherent and effective from beginning to end.

Axilea

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on January 28, 2008

i like how this write went from indecision to opportunity

Reviewed by F William Broome

Reviewed on January 28, 2008

Well said. Each of us surrenders to forces stronger, and it's good to remember that there are these forces, and they will have their way. I believe in your line,"...I watch the dark sky surrender to the sun"
This is good reading. - Bill

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on January 28, 2008

Dawn,

Take it while you can. Opportunity only knocks once. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 28, 2008

Outstanding piece....thanks for sharing!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ed J.

Reviewed on January 28, 2008

Very insightful and well written! Second thoughts tend to come with time. I like the way you always leave a poem wit optomism.

Stay well and keep writing.

Ed

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 28, 2008

Perserverence and hope carry this poem to the limit as you offer us a chance to see that dark skies can clear up if we are patient. Well done Dawn...enjoyed.

Fee

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on January 28, 2008

Beautiful! I love your depiction of indecision...
Cryssa

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on January 28, 2008

We all surrender in one way or the other. I like this a lot, Dawn. Well done!
Becca~

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 28, 2008

Dawn,

Absolutely gorgeous image and write: darkness, made lighter by hope! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on January 28, 2008

I am really liking what you are putting out lately, Dawn. You combine the dark with hope in the wings . . . That is a good combination . . .