Precipice (poem) by Dawn Anderson on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on September 5, 2008

An outstanding write Dawn
Love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed on September 2, 2008

We all look for the answers... and sometimes even when we are answered... we don't recognize it... wonderful thought provoking writing. lindalaw

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on September 2, 2008

Dawn, this is particularly fine and has real depth.
John

Reviewed by Cynthia Buhain-Baello

Reviewed on September 2, 2008

Hello Dawn,

This is a very "introspective" poem and the other side of it makes faith in God even more beautiful - because standing on the Rock of Ages holds one more secure....than standing on the cliffs of doubt and uncertain future. Great insight!

Cynthia

Reviewed by Mary Coe

Reviewed on September 2, 2008

Dawn, this is Sooooooo beautiful! A brilliant write.

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on September 2, 2008

A cliffhanger where the answers dangle...sometimes it's sickness, physical or mental, sometimes it's disease that erases memory. Time on the side of spirituality restores the belief of prayer...looking inside the depths, we know there will always be questions and we have to search hard for the answers and take a leap of faith...solid words, Dawn...

Love,
Sage

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on September 2, 2008

Soul searching through the wisdom of God for answers to questions left unanswered, beautifully and respectfully stated...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on September 2, 2008

Runs out of time and mind from your writing that is what came to my mind. Excellent Liz

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on September 2, 2008

There are times when each of us stands on our own precipice... I love the description of the restlessness he feels. I hate it when my mind runs in restless nameless circles, that nothing seems to calm...and those circles sometimes whir faster and faster creating tornadoes in my mind...
Cryssa

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on September 2, 2008

...the past reflected, faced , searching for answers... that is a big step. Dawn I love your work,,, outstanding.
Christine

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on September 2, 2008

Powerfully penned and illustrated, Dawn; standing at the edge, wondering what to do. Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on September 2, 2008

Very nicely expressed emotions of a man struggling to find himself or maybe even the opposite...to lose himself in the oblivion of life. Very nicely done Dawn.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by L Hippler

Reviewed on September 2, 2008

Nice description of introspection, Dawn. I think a lot of people can identify with this one.

Reviewed by S Phillips

Reviewed on September 2, 2008

Nice expression of the anguish awaiting extinguish.

Reviewed by Southern Comfort

Reviewed on September 2, 2008

Much said in a few powerful lines. As time passes we tend to see our lives with wiser eyes and doubts come to ask," Am I where I truly want to be and am I with my true soul mate?" Then the what ifs and might have beens play games with a troubled mind. SC

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on September 2, 2008

such deeply felt sentiments-so well expressed

Reviewed by Ted Bossis

Reviewed on September 2, 2008

to believe & unveil ~ preciousness .~. evol Ted

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on September 2, 2008

Dawn,
Very deeply nestled this poem comes alive from that place. There is so much to see in this world that will help. Living in the moment, is something I do now, and it really helps. This place in the photo looks so familiar to me, please, tell me where it was taken.
Much peace, love, and light to you and your family,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on September 2, 2008

Beautiful, most beautiful POEM, from YOUR work!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on September 2, 2008

Dawn this is so Beautiful and flowing write. Tiem does heal all wounds but sometime the wounds are deep and it takes much longer. Loved this, Love, Bonnie