Parking Space (poem) by Edwin Hurdle on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on September 26, 2009

your style is intrigueing and the way you approach your topics are great. i do enjoy the simple analogies with such a flair. continue on my friend, i like what i read.

Reviewed by Margaret Mullings

Reviewed on September 10, 2009

Very, very interesting Edwin! You did make me laugh, and laughter is good for the heart! but on a more serious note, you are a gifted writer! Blessings!

Love And Prayers
Always!!!

Reviewed by Dixie Dawn Michelle (Reader)

Reviewed on August 20, 2009

This is romantically great; majestic and wonderful.

Thnak you for sharing "Parking Space".

In appreciation,

Dixie Dawn Michelle

Reviewed by Sheila Parrish-Spence (Reader)

Reviewed on August 14, 2009

This is full of deep meaning and feeling. Expressions like these are truly well thought out. Thank you for this.

Reviewed by Melie Bacon

Reviewed on July 27, 2009

Agreed. It's hard to find the perfect spot because there's only one perfect spot and all other "spots" are second fiddle. Like many of us my quest continues, some spots take longer to find but I suspect that it'll be worth the wait; many of us talk/write about love although we've never really experienced it in all its splendor--romantic love, that is--and we idealize it. Like the song by Foreigner says, "I wanna know what love is...." I've had a glimmer of it before and finding my "Parking Space" is what keeps me going. Good analogy.

Mel

Reviewed by Nicole Weaver

Reviewed on July 5, 2009

Edwin,
My goodness, you sure are gifted! I am very intrigued with your ablity to take an ordinary subject and use it as a theme to wrie a masterful poem. YOU DID AGAIN!!!!!!! VERY CLEVER!!!!!!!!!!
Regards,
Nicole

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on June 30, 2009

THE CORRELATION OF LOOKING FOR A LOVE TO LOOKING FOR A PARKING SPACE IS GREAT AND ENJOYED. YOUR PHRASES PRODUCE CLEAR IMAGERY. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS. JOYCE

Reviewed by Natasha Head (Reader)

Reviewed on June 5, 2009

Enjoyed your poem and comparisons in this piece. God willing no one tries to steal your parking spot! One like this can be hard to hang on to :)

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on June 2, 2009

Edwin, Thanks for commenting on my site. Your poem was refreshing.
It reminded me that men have feelings too. Take care,
Beckers

Reviewed by Paul Mc Cann

Reviewed on May 26, 2009

Edwin ,
Chasing corners of the heart with this one ,
Loves on the freeway .
Inspiring piece .

Write on .
Paul

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 21, 2009

interesting allegory ... nicely penned ...

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on May 21, 2009

I love this poem truly symbolic
I guess you could think of a heart as
a please to park and rest your heart
Kind of like your place of safety
Truly unique write and metaphor
Love how your words paints such beautiful canvas on
The readers my mind ( me )
Truly a brilliant piece
Sending you Peace Love and Light�.Yolie

Reviewed by Ray { The Great Canadian Buzzard }

Reviewed on May 20, 2009

I enjoyed this poem
Nicely written metaphor, just be careful where you park
Look for no parking and private parking signs LOL
Have a nice day
Ray { Not a Poet }

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on May 17, 2009

Nice little allegory.

Ron

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on May 15, 2009

well now edwin, you really took this metaphor for a cross-country tour! nicely done.
cg

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on May 15, 2009

Nice job Edwin! Love seems to find us when we stop looking for it! That's how my life has been.

Reviewed by Milton Handfield

Reviewed on May 15, 2009

What an intelligent way of narrating your poem. Excellent.

cheers
milton

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on May 8, 2009

This is g r e a t, Edwin! Romantic and clever and original. . .
l o v e . i t ! Write ON!! Phyllis

Reviewed by Bill Grimes Jr.

Reviewed on May 7, 2009

Very clever use of metaphors to make your bold and endearing statement of love........Beautiful work Edwin......Heartfelt and sincere........I enjoyed it greatly my friend.....

Peace,

Bill :-)

Reviewed by deleted deleted (Reader)

Reviewed on May 4, 2009

Terrific metaphors! And thank you for your kind words on my outpourings.

Love, Peace & Jazzy Harmony
Estrella

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on May 2, 2009

Smart man. True gentleman. True heart. You're a rare breed, Edwin, and I appreciate this write. Great analogy...

Lin

Reviewed by kg cummings

Reviewed on April 28, 2009

I like the respect you have for another's space. That is an honorable trait. This is a very nice piece. Your friend, Kathy

Reviewed by Duke LaRance

Reviewed on April 24, 2009

You have a very good outlook on life and express it well. I could use an attitude adjustment.

Reviewed by Afrika Abney

Reviewed on April 22, 2009

Nice write

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on April 21, 2009

Eddy! YOU are AMAZINGGGGGGGGGGGG! and YOUR WRITING is always filled with such PASSION!
I love the Parking Spot!

Miss YOU too!

WRITE ON!
Warmest Blessings of Love, Light, Peace, Joy, and Inspirations, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExooo
Pss..I am copying and pasting this to your message board too, incase you get it twice, This beautiful yearn-filled poem I don't believe I ever read, so I believe it will go through, if wasn't re-posted! YOU do such fine work with that crafty heart and mind of yours! WRITE ON!

Reviewed by Zahra V (Reader)

Reviewed on April 16, 2009

That's a very thought provoking title!!! I love it!!

Zahra

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on April 12, 2009

Love it. Liz

Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath

Reviewed on April 10, 2009

"Parking Space" great title and poem Edwin.

Enjoy your Easter,
Gwendolyn

Reviewed by Stephanie Webb

Reviewed on April 8, 2009

Hi Edwin,
Really like the Parking Spot. BEAUTIFUL! Truly put a smile on my face.
Thanks for your nice review!!!!

Take Care
Steph