Seal tight
Shut down
Close off in front of everybody
Fear of judgments
Fear of reaction
Fear of not being understood
Dont feel scare
Dont feel ashame
Dont feel embarass
Release your sadness
Release your anger
Open your envelope
Share your heart
Share your mind
Share whats inside of you
You deserve help
You deserve comfort
You deserve light to push darkness away
Look deep into my eyes
Tell me whats wrong
Tell me whats bothering you
Dont feel scare
Dont feel ashame
Dont feel embarass
Release your addictions
Release your problems
Open your envelope
Share your heart
Share your mind
Share whats inside of you
Do yoga with your voice
Stretch your feelings all the way out
You will be heard loud and clear
Any day,any night
Any time will not be wasted
It will be useful to make you better
Open your envelope
Share your heart
Share your mind
Share whats inside of you
This was fantastic! I had to read it twice, just excellent writing my friend. Man, plaster this one on a billboard!!! Perfection of life right here. I loved it!
Kim
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Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on October 7, 2010
Wonderful writing sweet man..stay safe and well..Hugss
Reviewed by Victoria Lane (Reader)
Reviewed on June 24, 2010
How can one resist sharing after reading this?! lol- it's wonderful for someone to be so interested in hearing the deepest thoughts of another. I enjoyed this. Best to you Edwin :)
Wonderfully expressed. I like how you used short succinct phrases for simplicity, but upon deeper inspection, the phrases blend together for more complex thought and feeling. I can relate to so much of this. In fact, I am currently in the process of opening my envelope. Thank you!
THIS IS A POWERFUL METAPHORIC WORK. ONE WILL FIND THAT A 'SEEMINGLY' EASY TASK OF OPENING THEIR 'ENVELOPE'...IS NOT EASY AT ALL. THANKS FOR SHARING EDWIN, AND GOD BLESS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
personalities are mostly sealed envelopes -- even those we classify as extroverts -- absolute openness is very difficult to achieve -- the vulnerability that results leaves most mortals feeling very insecure -- a thought provoking message written with great expertise Edwin -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael
When two men hit the reset button and decide to go out looking for the good in the world, they not only find it but also a lot more.
P.S. The title is listed on Amazon under Look for Something Good by Robert Drews (not by Robert H. Drews)
From the Caribbean Sea to Machu Picchu in Peru, and from birds to flowers and butterflies, Reflections and Treasured Wonders offers a collection of images gathered from around the world.
Regards, Steve
Kim
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Lena
great write!
Pierre
Regis
Signed & Delivered :)
Peace & Inspirations
Vickie
Georg