sometimes the drama outweighs the benefit...but other times...we're blessed.
I gots me a poetry spot.
The kind'a place that's hot like Cheers - without the beer - where everybody knows my name.
Where the game ain't the same as it is'n every other spot'n which I've dropped a hot piece that sizzled like pork grease over a slow-roastin', mesquite flame.
Some'a them spots where wannabe poets run game tryin'a be The One, tellin' un-truths (that should'a been fool-proof) made so by bein' subjected to selfish moods.
These fools've been blessed to see past the masks'n yet tell only enough'a what they seen to get a lil ass.
Nah Soul, this spot I got is top-of-the-line, the Owners, they're two-of-a-kind:
They ain't at all down with them mindless mind games, where poets be tryin'a run the same ol' same, fallin' prey to lame-ass sycophants with crass intentions, tryin'a come up by literary invention, lyin (by any other name)'n gossipin'n trippin'n just bringin' down the vibe, tryin'a hide the fact that they're basically poseurs seekin' closure to their Artistic Dreams.
When they hit this spot they seem to run out'a steam, eyes get all wide when they read about true poetic dreams'n listen to words spoken'n love'n see the glistenin' souls shinin' with that Light from the dove above'n witness personal demons feenin', bein' banished by the strength of God's might'n see the evidence'a poets writin' who are blessed with the second sight.
They begin to drool'n gibber shiverin'n peerin' around furtively, stumblin' out into the darkness alone, realizin' only then that their hearts've turned to stone'n that they're mere reflections of a greater Truth, a Theory of Life denied the ultimate proof, and thusly chastized retreat to lick their wounds'n tell the tale of how they almost died too soon.
Of how they knew of a spot where Devils ravish innocence with hellish plots.
Where Cyclops speak with fork-ed tongues.
Where Ogres bellow with fiery lungs.
Where sultry Sirens tempt Saints'n Furies copulate with ancient Haints.
Never mind the truth (whatever that is): this spot's the proof that poetry lives'n the hearts of poets who purport to give the world a window into Eternity'n order to reveal the boundaries of Probability.
My spot's a home away from home, my spot's a tome to supplant all tomes.
A Book of Love, of surreal words, of thundering songs that must be heard.
My spot is definitely one of a kind, my spot is definitively end-of-the-line.
Sign of the times, of a road's last, winding turn, end of a depthless yearning, of passion's satiation, ever-burning.
This spot is all I'll ever need, because this spot is where my soul is freed.
This is a complex whirl of thoughts and feelings and the really amazing thing is that your passion shines through in sentence line after line..unrelenting and wonderful..I have been told and I do believe that poetry needs to make someone else FEEL or THINK to be a success and I think you hit both of those criteria and so much more..You are an amazing writer Mark.
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on November 6, 2005
By Jove you're good Mark..naah..you're excellent--saved this one..
We are the spot, Mark. No matter where we place it, the truth that we speak, the love that we share, the light that we leave, is what makes it our place, The Place. If none who come behind us understand our words, if we fail to awaken even one spirit, if we are unable to direct a single person into the light, it does not weaken our desire to do so. I leave my words that perhaps....but it is a gift to be able to write and a blessing to want to leave something behind for those who follow. Fantastic write!!
Take care,
Sherry
"Where sultry Sirens
tempt Saints'n
Furies copulate
with ancient Haints."
Funny how 'Saints'n' rhymes with Satan's...
This is all we poets need, Mark, a 'spot' to call our own. Sometimes, without others knowing the 'wherefores', the 'why' must be the arrow that leads to the singular path of perspective.
You've penned perspective. And, have given us knowledge. Thank you.
What I like most about THE SPOT is how your recognition of its very vital spiritual, cultural, and communal roles endows it with a kind of sacred intensity. Having drank from its well of dynamic creative flow, your lines give back to the same with an authentic sense of honor and appreciation. Beautiful.
Bravo! A tour de force Mark and an outstanding poem!
I'm truly humbled by your exceptional use of language
and the images are fantastic! Thanks for sharing your
mighty talent, and wisdom!
Vesna :)
God bless,
Sandie.
Greetings and Congratulations to Poet Mark Rockeymoore.
This is a magnificent delivering in poetic beauty and message.
Thank You for adding value to the American Fine Letters.
Healthy Creative Life, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Calvin
Regis
Take care,
Sherry
Sign Of Times Is Today!
Long As Greed Mongering Man Exists-*FOOLs Man His Mindless Mind Games!
* What (Mindless) Fools You (Man) Mortals Be...
TRASK
tempt Saints'n
Furies copulate
with ancient Haints."
Funny how 'Saints'n' rhymes with Satan's...
This is all we poets need, Mark, a 'spot' to call our own. Sometimes, without others knowing the 'wherefores', the 'why' must be the arrow that leads to the singular path of perspective.
You've penned perspective. And, have given us knowledge. Thank you.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Love Tinka
I'm truly humbled by your exceptional use of language
and the images are fantastic! Thanks for sharing your
mighty talent, and wisdom!
Love,
Eileen