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Peach of a Day
by Marilyn Seray → (All Poetry by Marilyn Seray)
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A related Haiku
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Nature’s unpicked food
Succulent and plentiful
Stay out, gnaw at it


Trying to fit into four
inches of space-
squeezing in,
screaming
hiding my eyes
i’m losing my mind
a mouse had me trapped
I saw it earlier but
thought it was a peach
pit that had missed the
garbage.

Noooooooo!!!

i peek to be sure-
still there-
frantic-
dancing on
my toes over hot
coals-

screaming-

Nooooo, no, no, no, no

one more peek-
still there-
i’m shattering my own
eardrums

please don’t get my feet

drenched in sweat
clawing
pulling at my
clothes

i can’t stand it-
i hurt all over

if i could only rip my
skin off

the me inside is
angry and crazed
fighting to get out
now, i
whimper-
and jump at every
movement and sound

i have thoughts of me
walking up to it
bending over;
face to face
picking
it up between my fingers

the images haunt me-
all the “what if’s”

i can still see it- and
electrifying chills
bolt though my body
faster than the speed of
light

peachy-
just peachy-

What a peach of a day!



© MS 08.09.04



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 Reviews of "Peach of a Day"
Reviewed by Dan Zuewski (Reader)
Reviewed on August 19, 2004
Wow, this was very vivid... I'm not normally scared of mice but I felt your fear here! ;)

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on August 14, 2004
OMG Marylin the NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO YIKes me too i can't stand them.......This is so ghood even at the expense of the torment....
HUGS
Peg

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on August 14, 2004
Lotsa Children Have Mice For Pets,If Clean Not Runnen Sewers Like Most Humans They're Excellent Pets_

Unique Scary Different Write!

TRASK

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 14, 2004
This is a sweet write, Marilyn. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 14, 2004
Well done Maarilyn!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on August 14, 2004
Very nice!

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on August 13, 2004
It's that time of the year, for peaches I mean.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 13, 2004
Peach of a write!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 13, 2004
Oh my !Marilyn a mouse the size of a peach pit;-)
And it terrorized you? Sounds just like me;)hahahaha
I haven't seen one in years, but I remember when I had
my house I used to get field mice.BTW...Fantastic haiku!


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