Marilyn,
I love this!! It is powerful and sensual, and Wow, it is really potent!
Excellent, excellent write!!!
Hugs,
Maria
Reviewed by Madame X (Reader)
Reviewed on January 3, 2003
"I’ll paint your tongue with strokes
Of passion and send you on a spiraling
Journey of bliss" Fantastic write. : )
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on January 3, 2003
That first time kiss is great! Good write.
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on January 3, 2003
A beautiful sultry write sweets! "You will not want for anything, except me." Say's it all girl! (((hugs)))
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on January 3, 2003
"I’ll paint your tongue with strokes
Of passion and send you on a spiraling
Journey of bliss "
Marilyn, this is so sensitive and seductive. Nice write. Floria
Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on January 3, 2003
Excellent ... The first time ... >>> Kiss ... Great ...
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Except Wow and Wow again
This is exceptional
the senuality the longing the love and the passion are equisite
Ok so maybe i had something to say
I was just speechless at first
I love this!! It is powerful and sensual, and Wow, it is really potent!
Excellent, excellent write!!!
Hugs,
Maria
Of passion and send you on a spiraling
Journey of bliss" Fantastic write. : )
"I’ll paint your tongue with strokes
Of passion and send you on a spiraling
Journey of bliss "
Marilyn, this is so sensitive and seductive. Nice write. Floria
~Sanil
This feels so warm
and seductive...
Beautiful as always..
Happy 2003...
Hugs,
Trixie
Amor