Snowflakes (poem) by Marilyn Seray on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by me

Reviewed on February 27, 2003

sensual and very descriptive. a wonderful piece of prose!

Reviewed on February 18, 2003

Marilyn,
This is really gorgeous, you write romance wonderfully!

"My salt and warmth has dissolved
and dried the pretty snowflakes
what I feel now is the warm wetness
from your melted snowflakes that
filled me and satisfied my thirst"

I love the imagery in this one!

Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on February 17, 2003

Hey Girl...

I'M HERE IN BRANSON MISSOURI AND FOR FLATLANDER FROM THE SALT MARSHES ALONG THE ATLANTIC SNOW IS A NOVELTY FOR ME. NOW I SEE A WHOLE DIFFERENT FACET OF THE SNOWFLAKE THANKS TO YOU.
LOVE AND PEACE,
SUSAN

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on February 17, 2003

Ditto.
~E

Reviewed by Misty Lackey (Reader)

Reviewed on February 17, 2003

Well done! A favorite poem that I will always remember! you are a good poet *hugs*

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on February 17, 2003

I am with Belle never think of snow the same again.
peggy

Reviewed by Eileen

Reviewed on February 17, 2003

Very clever Marilyn sensuousness in a snowflake who woulda thunk it;-)only you;-)well done!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on February 17, 2003

I'll never think of snow the same, only you, Marilyn, could turn something frozen into something hot!

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on February 17, 2003

Another one of your
lovely writes...
I am in Illinois,
So far we have been
pretty lucky...
Not much snow,
But many cooooold days..."Knock on wood"

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)

Reviewed on February 17, 2003

we are having blizzard here i at first not like snow but after reading this snow okay its just tooo cold brr grr but very sensually romantic and sweet great job on this

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on February 17, 2003

Beautiful and sensual, Marilyn. I love this
Chrissie x

Reviewed by Chester Hardy lll

Reviewed on February 17, 2003

Beautifully romantic Marilyn.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 17, 2003

beautiful write; i sure do miss the snow here in texas; makes me homesick for ohio and their snows! i wish we'd get a blizzard like they are getting in the northeast (but without the fatalities of course!)!! lovely job, marilyn! love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 17, 2003

lovely! i love the snow...i miss the snow...i live in texas, all we get is flurries. or ice...thanks for bringing back memories of when i lived in ohio...(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on February 17, 2003

Another lovely write Marilyn!
Jack

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on February 17, 2003

What beautiful thoughts in here Marilyn...Lovely...floria