The Hated Word (poem) by Marilyn Seray on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 8, 2003

Ratty love to you....lol...
Rats in general are okay......but if they die in your ceiling....God they can stink....had one in mine last week.....lol....
I stay on a farm and have this problem of the rats getting into my garage and then into my ceiling....and at night they sound like soccer players .....scary thought hey.....but at least I know they are not ghosts....hehehe
Love Tinka

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on March 8, 2003

i don't like being associated with rats...ugh...hate them with a passion *shudders*...LOL, thanks for your creativity and for my nightmares tonight! *LOL* excellent write...the humor is outstanding! :) (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 8, 2003

kewl write, marilyn! :) (((HUGS)))

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 8, 2003

very creative and writing them could be fun.

Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)

Reviewed on March 8, 2003

laughter and fun in the most creative way, Marilyn

Love from India - Joel -

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)

Reviewed on March 8, 2003

very interesting view and very sadly true this was wonderfully great nice job on this

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on March 8, 2003

wow...very very creative write...BHUWAN

Reviewed by Melissa Rives

Reviewed on March 8, 2003

Very creative!!! :)

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on March 8, 2003

You are cool

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on March 8, 2003

A unique creative write. Enjoyed this very much.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on March 8, 2003

This is so unique and creative!!

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on March 8, 2003

Smiles.A lovely, well written poem Marilyn.
Chrissie x

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on March 8, 2003

Marylin,
rats this is so excellent..
smiles laughing at sketchmans comment.
Peg

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on March 7, 2003

A good one!
Hee, hee, rat turds....

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on March 7, 2003

I know a commerical you would love to see! Wonderful write.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on March 7, 2003

I don't know what it's called either, but it's damn good.

~E

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 7, 2003

rats!

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on March 7, 2003

This has got cleverness dripping off the page.. you wonderful poet, you! I had to read it twice, mostly because I hated to see it end.. really cool, Marilyn. (smile). katy.

Reviewed by Reindeer

Reviewed on March 7, 2003

This was great! loved every word...Ha! gave me my laugh for the night..

Reindeer

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on March 7, 2003

Enjoyed this--the format, expression, and the humor...

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on March 7, 2003

Wow, sounds like a horrific affinity, Marilyn...scary write, I never was too afraid of mice, hardly ever saw a rat, couple dead ones that were extremely large and ugly...oh, man, get these thoughts out of my head!! Creepy old rats!

:)

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on March 7, 2003

Now this is the levity we all need tonight. I just had my hairdresser over to trim my bangs with a rat tailed comb. Funny now but I must go and read this to her. She will die laughing. Thank you immensely for the fun. We all are in need of uplifting.
Love and peace,
Susan