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Black In Darkness
by Marilyn Seray → (All Poetry by Marilyn Seray)
  
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Dreaming in the dark
of me being in the dark
I see nothing but black
in darkness, so I close
my eyes and it’s still dark

Stumbling towards the
window, I feel for the
shade and pull it up –
there is nothing but the
dark blackness of night

I stick my hand out and
something grabs my arm
I can’t see it but it feels
cold

The arm pulls me through
the window and leads me
blindly toward a tiny speck
of white light in the distance,
but it doesn’t change in size
on my approach

As quick as the speed of light
a Gush of wind blows the
tiny light out

I scream out in the blackness.
the wind shrills my voice
and shuts it off quickly at its
peak

I awake in the dark and find
myself behind my closed eyes
in the dark

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 Reviews of "Black In Darkness"
Reviewed by Lynn Barry
Reviewed on April 21, 2003
Kind of makes me understand how it might be to be blind...very nice..

Reviewed by Melissa Rives
Reviewed on April 13, 2003
You've unveiled the power of darkness!

Reviewed by Trixie Love
Reviewed on April 12, 2003
Hi Marilyn,
What a great write...
However, I am with
Ron...I have to have it pitch dark at night....

Hugs,
Trixie

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 12, 2003
sounds like a bad nightmare to me.......put some hay in your room to feed the mare if you dare
love
tinka

Reviewed on April 12, 2003
good, dark write! i can identify with william bonilla..i, too, sleep with a light on; i am also scared of the dark, and so is my twin sister, karla! love, your friend, karen lynn in texas. (((HUGS))) :)

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on April 12, 2003
Good Morning, Marilyn
A very powerful write
I hope You see light soon. Be Well


yf
tony

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on April 12, 2003
Excellent, Marilyn ...chilling.
Chrissie

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on April 12, 2003
dude i dont know if I want to go to ssleep tonight or not this was damn scary it was awesoemly eerie and horror filled nice job on this poem

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on April 12, 2003
Marilyn, you thrilled me with this one, no crap, I ate it write up and never crashed so hard as when I read the last lines. Picking myself up and putting on my shades.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on April 12, 2003
Wow grabbed and held all my interest, great write.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on April 11, 2003
Good one...

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on April 11, 2003
4-11-03

Most Interestingly so!

TRASK

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on April 11, 2003
Scary! It has to be black dark when I go to bed.
Your becoming one the great one's Marylin..

Reviewed on April 11, 2003
Oh yes, hauntingly beautiful,

lovely,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Angela Denney (Reader)
Reviewed on April 11, 2003
Wow ypur a really good writer im not genna be able to sleep to night!

Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Reviewed on April 11, 2003
"I scream out in the blackness.
the wind shrills my voice
and shuts it off quickly at its
peak"

I love this!!!!

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on April 11, 2003
Very good, I hate the darkness, still sleep with night light....lol
excellent write

William

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 11, 2003
wow! "behind my closed eyes". What have you been reading Marilyn, I want to read it too;-)Excellent as all your work has been lately, really soaring!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on April 11, 2003
Marylin,
excellent
haunting and dark
"I awake in the dark and find
myself behind my closed eyes
in the dark "
Peggy


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