Dreaming in the dark
of me being in the dark
I see nothing but black
in darkness, so I close
my eyes and it’s still dark
Stumbling towards the
window, I feel for the
shade and pull it up –
there is nothing but the
dark blackness of night
I stick my hand out and
something grabs my arm
I can’t see it but it feels
cold
The arm pulls me through
the window and leads me
blindly toward a tiny speck
of white light in the distance,
but it doesn’t change in size
on my approach
As quick as the speed of light
a Gush of wind blows the
tiny light out
I scream out in the blackness.
the wind shrills my voice
and shuts it off quickly at its
peak
I awake in the dark and find
myself behind my closed eyes
in the dark
good, dark write! i can identify with william bonilla..i, too, sleep with a light on; i am also scared of the dark, and so is my twin sister, karla! love, your friend, karen lynn in texas. (((HUGS))) :)
Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on April 12, 2003
Good Morning, Marilyn
A very powerful write
I hope You see light soon. Be Well
dude i dont know if I want to go to ssleep tonight or not this was damn scary it was awesoemly eerie and horror filled nice job on this poem
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on April 12, 2003
Marilyn, you thrilled me with this one, no crap, I ate it write up and never crashed so hard as when I read the last lines. Picking myself up and putting on my shades.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on April 12, 2003
Wow grabbed and held all my interest, great write.
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What a great write...
However, I am with
Ron...I have to have it pitch dark at night....
Hugs,
Trixie
love
tinka
A very powerful write
I hope You see light soon. Be Well
yf
tony
Chrissie
Most Interestingly so!
TRASK
Your becoming one the great one's Marylin..
lovely,
Reindeer
the wind shrills my voice
and shuts it off quickly at its
peak"
I love this!!!!
excellent write
William
excellent
haunting and dark
"I awake in the dark and find
myself behind my closed eyes
in the dark "
Peggy