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Tell Me What You Do
by Marilyn Seray → (All Poetry by Marilyn Seray)
  
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Do you watch as the soft flame bathes
my form in candlelight

Tell me what you do

Do you watch as I loosen the towel
that’s wrapped around my moist body
and let it drop to the floor

Tell me what you do

Do you watch as I let my hair cascade
down, and bounce in slow motion on my
shoulders

Tell me what you do

Do you watch as I pump fragrant lotion
in my hand and seductively smooth it on
from my toes to the very top of my thighs

Tell me what you do

Do you watch as I part my thighs and let
my fingers linger a moment - arching my
back and rolling my head exposing the
softness of my neck

Tell me what you do

Do you watch when I select a luscious
strawberry from a bowl and lift it to my
tongue and wrap my puckered lips around
it

Tell me what you do

Do you watch when it’s red juice spills
on to my hand and leisurely runs down
my wrist

Tell me what you do

Do you watch as my tongue slowly licks
up the sweet nectar from my wrist to my
fingertips as I look in your direction

Tell me what you do

Do you watch me approach the window
and reach up to pull down the shades;
giving you the pleasure of watching my
blossoms grow while the ripening within
the depths of my secret garden is about to
erupt

Tell me what you do

Do you watch as I blow out the candles and
disappear into the darkness just as you do

I know you watch

I do it all for you

Tell me what you do

And I’ll tell you what I do


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 Reviews of "Tell Me What You Do"
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on May 10, 2003

LOL....sounds like me when I want to give the neighbor a show and leave the blinds open! LOL....Teasing of course....wink...

Teresa

Reviewed by Charles
Reviewed on May 8, 2003
Marilyn, it's getting real hot here. I don't know how much more of this sweet torture I can stand......smile

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on April 17, 2003
Love the way you ended this one! Great Write.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 17, 2003
very sensual!

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on April 17, 2003
Powerful, sensual piece Marilyn..fabulous.
Chrissie

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen
Reviewed on April 17, 2003
its getting Hot in here
fanning self yikes between you and tedly hot damn
josie

Reviewed on April 17, 2003
Wow..This one was very sensual!

Excellent,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on April 17, 2003
Marilyn, You definitely know how to get into a man's thoughts! ~Joseph

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on April 17, 2003
Jeepers Peepers Ma'am, I didn't know you saw me sitting there
confined to my chair
in front of or from your point of view
behind my window,
breathing deeply into the night air,
releasing my tension and my lust
in your direction as with dark eyes squinting,
as I whispered all the illicit things
that I liked about your performance.
Stroking my face and then my chest
with my own hand, pretending that it was yours.
Rising and hardening ever higher in my seat,
as you stroked your perfect body in the light.
Oh the frustration I did feel as you pulled the shade
down over my dreams and temporary reality,
of seeing such beauty
being directed at me.
I sit and wait for more.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on April 17, 2003
Whoa this is one sensual seductive write!! Exceptional erotica.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on April 16, 2003
4-16-03

Just Keep On Doing What You Do . Authorsden!

TRASK

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on April 16, 2003
oh ya...this is one big question....very sexy..

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on April 16, 2003
A sensual delight
smooth write Marylin

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on April 16, 2003
Marylyn
I am watching you and I am not telling you, what I am doing.
This is sensuality at its best.
What an excellent write.

William

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on April 16, 2003
Hi Marilyn, After reading this hot write. I would tell you what I would do. No better not! This was beautifully sensual.


pax
tony

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on April 16, 2003
Sensual...

Reviewed by Trixie Love
Reviewed on April 16, 2003
Hi Marilyn,
Wow this os one powerful write...

Excellent job...

Hgs,
Trixie

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on April 16, 2003
Marylin,
whew You go girl this one is seductive,sensual and wow....
Peggy


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