Past Present Future (poem) by Marilyn Seray on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on January 24, 2004

Sounds just like my mum, the music is very effective, the way you bring this phobia to life, I now see what you mean, hope you got cats..

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)

Reviewed on September 20, 2003

Dark and haunting. Extremely vivid!

~Jackie~

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on September 18, 2003

powerfully descriptive! some really superb imagery...

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on September 3, 2003

This is powerfully chilling and eerie, Marilyn...superbly done and haunting.
Amor

Reviewed by Melissa Rives

Reviewed on August 17, 2003

wow, such powerful verse and imagery...outstanding and gripping!

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on August 17, 2003

This is excellent, Marilyn. So chilling!
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on August 14, 2003

Well done!

Reviewed by Digital Fairy

Reviewed on August 13, 2003

A very strong write... hope this was more on the fictional side... excellent poem :)

--Karissa

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on August 12, 2003

This was so chilling, I hope you can keep it away from you, I love your poetry so very much..this one, just got to me..

Reindeer

Reviewed by The Gentle Man

Reviewed on August 12, 2003

a very haunting poem Marilyn with appropriate eerie music......well done!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on August 11, 2003

Great write!

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on August 11, 2003

this is a profund piece
excellent write

William

Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader)

Reviewed on August 11, 2003

CRUMBS!.......I could imagine every second on this, made me want to keep looking behind too. How awful, knowing something has control of your future.
Wonderful write....but somehow that doesnt seem the right word........

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on August 11, 2003

Wow, wonderful chilly write. Excellent.

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott

Reviewed on August 10, 2003

I know this all to well, excellent descriptive write! ~Z~

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on August 10, 2003

I hate rats, just caught ten in my warehouse and one big one with painted lips and poison pen in the den, Goodnight Iowa, We love ya!

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on August 10, 2003

WOW and ~WHEW~ Marilyn what a ride in psychoanalysis reality this was, d.mn creative and excellant!!!!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on August 10, 2003

I've been through this. A great write Marilyn..

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on August 10, 2003

Hi Marilyn,
Wow, this felt like
tales from the crept.
Bone chilling indeed..

Great write...

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on August 10, 2003

My god! This is absolutely brilliant.. thrilling, in fact. My heart raced.. pounded.. the music is amazingly appropriate but your words are stark, yet darkly elegant for your message.. I'm simply blown down here! "nasty barnacle" <--- fantastic phrasing.. I just can't seem to say enough.. What a write!! katy.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on August 10, 2003

Past Is Dead, Present Better Make Best Of It, Cause Future All Ya Got Left!

TRASK

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on August 10, 2003

a gripping write throughout. nice work

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on August 10, 2003

Gosh! Marilyn, this was really heartfelt write indeed, and so much emotions has packed into it. Simply amazing write!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 10, 2003

Oh God this one moved me like hell!!
Hope it is only poerty!!

Love Tinka