Contentment (poem) by Marilyn Seray on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Vincent Martin (Reader)

Reviewed on February 1, 2004

Now this is how every man would like to be taken...beautiful erotic write milady...~DarkBard~

Reviewed by Rodd Jokre (Reader)

Reviewed on November 13, 2003

Ride 'em cowgirl! ;)

Rodd

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on November 12, 2003

beautiful, ertoic poem! very stimulating;)

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on November 12, 2003

Beautiful and passionate
an excellent write

William

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on November 11, 2003

"he filled his hands with her soft swells."

I love your word usage here marilyn...this is so passionate and yet written in such a soft way...I adore this kind of poetry....well done..floria

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on November 7, 2003

There is no doubt that you met the challenge easily in this sensual and steamy poem. Very well doen Marilyn. Bill

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on November 5, 2003

the majority rules very steamy!!!

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on November 5, 2003

Bravo Marilyn!!!!
You have captured true passion at its utmost steamy erotic hot peak!
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on November 5, 2003

This was so beautifully passionate, absolutely lovely,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci

Reviewed on November 4, 2003

Marilyn,
I loved everything about this write,
including the pic.!
You captured the passion at
its peak!

Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle

Reviewed on November 4, 2003

Only one word to describe this, Marilyn -- PERFECT!
Thanks,
Jill :)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on November 4, 2003

Steamy and sensual. Very erotic. Nicely done.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on November 4, 2003

Lover reverie

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on November 4, 2003

You scored a WINNNER with this one, my New York Marilyn!~ Well done! (((HUGS))) Challenge met with a BANG! BRAVA! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on November 4, 2003

Lisa....what a response to the challenge....hot hot hot write...erotica at its very best.....love n luck.....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on November 4, 2003

Wow Marilyn,,erotica at it's best! Challenge very well met. Lisa

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on November 4, 2003

Great!

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on November 4, 2003

Wow, steaming hot write. Excellent.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on November 4, 2003

Wow! Marilyn, this was exceptionally great! Sensual and erotic indeed!

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on November 4, 2003

this is an erotic masterpiece, perfection, Marilyn.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on November 4, 2003

Hot and steamy! Wonderful addition to the challenge!

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on November 3, 2003

A most impressive write Marilyn.
"She leaned into him, rubbing her hardened sweet

cherries erotically against his chest." wow, this is very good

peace

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 3, 2003

Awesome write Marilyn!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on November 3, 2003

I thought this one was sensual, loving erotica, tastefully done, My Fav in this challenge.
Well done
Ch'erie