Por que te amo (Revised) (poem) by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii) on AuthorsDen

Por que te amo (Revised)
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Revised, reinstated and everlasting without apology.
(Because I love you) Š2006 M. Bennett Hooper(Mikii) Every minute that you are in my life is like an hour in paradise. How can one compare that which is priceless to anything else? I surrender to all that I held dear and pray that you not fear the whirlwind of my time with you nor allow it to become for you a burden impinging upon your life, your plans, or you goals some of which we shall share. I shall remain in your presence grateful that you were placed in my life at this time. My life has been changed by our meeting as it was preordained no doubt from another time. I do unashamedly want you very much and do not want you to feel any discomfort about it or harbor any preconceived conceptions about my expectations. I expect everything but willingly accept whatever you choose to give and or not give. Many days have passed since you were in my dreams, my thoughts, and my ethos. So tender is this love that its presence is recognized throughout a coming eternity. I am that I am consciously expressing my freedom from a reality that was destined before time to be. And you are who I have humbly awaited to enter my life. I therefore love you with an intensity that wreaks of my self discovery and capacity to be worthy of your love. I am free yet willingly enslaved by lifes possibilities.

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on September 22, 2006

Your poems are educational treasures buried in the sands of peace,love and justice.I salute you and your Bana with all my soul and heart.

Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii)

Rewritten because of controversy, reviewed originally by many who thought this revision unnecessary when compared with anothers' work.
I am too old for continuing BS. The Den stated this rewrite was unnecessary. This is my choice, my God given gifts do not require that I plagarize anything. I have not shouted my prior literary accomplishments but I guess I'll have to, so be on notice. Peace, love, blessings, and gratitude to all who review,read, and inspire me in my sunset years. <Mikii>

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on September 17, 2006

i enjoyed the concept and direction you arrived at in this poem ...

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on September 16, 2006

Hi Mikii:

Wonderful write!...and I'm so glad you have put the footnote there that tells us that several lines were that from Gwendolyn Thomas...as I admired both you and Gwendolyn a great deal!!!!!

Wonderful work to you both!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

OH MIKKI,
This is beautiful It also is the creators foundation to all things.. Love is the freatest gift this is so beautiful.

Peace, Blessings,
Joselyn

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Those that sing the grace of their love let their hearts pump bliss throughout their lives.

I have enjoyed the reading of "Por que te amo".

Long healthy lovely life, Poet.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on September 15, 2006

Beautiful...love doesn't bind...it frees.

You are on a roll tonight, girlfriend.

Elizabeth