Imagining for a moment how collective we share embraces through penmanship bringing a longing and yearning for intimate touches and physical titillation bearing fruit of virtue between teeth as I stand before you ever so exposed through prose allowing you a brief feel of my softness and inner secrets connected directed subjected to many facets of gems beneath my skin and my soul awaiting the ripe tender sensuality shared only between kindred lovers in the midst of evolution needing only oe incentive to become more than distant spirits.
Warming myself by fires of promise I gaze upon your gracious entity knowing the depth of my desires I am captured one more in your endless web my moth to your flame. I am devoured by more than wantoness as I reach deeo within myself searching for answers that only you possess I am nontheless whole free and anticipating what will surely come when you trust enfold and accept loving sacrifice as I gently place you upon loves altar.
Behold my honest heart and know that it awaits the caress that only you can give as I swallow words never before uttered to another. May you accept destiny as freely as I and become filled with its' promise of things to come. I own my love and your loveworth discard your fears know that heaven is indeed real in your eyes your smile and you.
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Reviews of "Odyssey"
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on July 16, 2007
Beautiful. HE's going to jump your bones for sure.
To me, it seems as if this work, plus the last one posted, just before Odyssey are somehow linked together. That's the way it plays in my foggy mind and both are absolutely wonderful.
A wantonly odyssey of promises under the skinn, of unfulfilled wishes and warming up hopes, oozing slowly from every pore a sensuality hiding beneath a virginal blush.
Well done.
Georg
Each person is but a grain of sand resting beside the sea. This thought sets the tone for Jill Eisnaugle’s latest poetry collection, Beside Still Waters.
Elizabeth
Peace,
Dan
Well done.
Georg