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Completely Floundered
by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii) → (All Poetry by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii))
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One more to complete for this Romance sequence as grumpy prepares to return.

©2007 M. Bennett Hooper



 


Mesmerized is how I feel when I met you I had no idea that this would come.
Now I sit here lost in my thoughts of how it came to be that you and I are sharing the same space in time.
Looking at one another so clearly mirror images I smile you smile
Eyes shut tight from tears that will never flow because I never open them.


Lingering at the gate of your life space pausing before entering the sound of your voice speeds up the beat of my heart.
I question the reflection I see in you as you question who makes the rules.
My cowards’ mouth speaks volumes of I don’t understand what you’re talking about.


Blends of jasmine and roses water lilies and pussy willows wave before us as you paint for me what is a new picture more surreal than Romeo and Juliet.
One conversation leads to another embracing this narrated journey.
No fairies in our tale no dragons to slay leaving no room for fear all doubt is erased by your laughter and all pain erased from past heartbreak.
How is this love?
We haven’t even had sex but we always make love never genital to genital always mentally.


My heart shouts I have searched for you all of my life but finders are not always keepers.
I shall keep you in my secret place where my love is always safe, returned, and comforting.
I dream in color love is my blue.
The sky is limitless how about you.


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 Reviews of "Completely Floundered"
Reviewed on July 26, 2007
Exquisite! a very very beautiful romantic poem. Enjoyed so much

Reviewed on July 24, 2007
This romance sparkles Mikii!
I love this!
DEEP and raw!
I feel a lull happening!
Warm Light, Love, Happiness and Peace! Warrior PURPLE Lady Sheeeoox
STay POsitive!
STay SAFE!
Namaste!
:)
Love Laugh and Love! DEEPLY!
Secret place where Love waits! I love that!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 24, 2007
I dream in color love is my blue.
The sky is limitless how about you.

Colorful dreams, are always the most powerful.

Reviewed by K. Mulroney
Reviewed on July 24, 2007
slow sway. Like a love song played soft and low. So nicely done!

Reviewed by john zimmerman
Reviewed on July 24, 2007
Nice, and nicely done

a good write

john+

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on July 24, 2007
Another good write, and good on you.

Dan

Reviewed on July 24, 2007
This is one incredible piece of poetry, poignant, strong yet vulnerable, unique.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on July 24, 2007
wonderful lines here-i enjoyed the phrases of love and the uncurrent of longng for more

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on July 24, 2007
"...no fairies in our tale, no dragons to slain..." and the romance can go out the window because the enchanted prince with the shining armour riding the white horse disappeared with the fairy tale, leaving a lonely maiden asking "...where are thou, Romeo..." with a flaming desired which only will be making mentally love.
That's completely floundered, and...completely brilliant!
Georg


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