Day finds me—
Reeling giddily ‘round me
All done up in golden dress
And azure scarves
Urging me to join the dance
But I, lost in my trance
Choose not to see
Eve arrives—
Dressed in hooded satin cloak
With longbow drawn
Shoots silver arrows
Up through velvet black
To pierce the dark
And make the stars
But even that, I must confess,
Does not impress—
With dogged resolve I'd rather sit
Through wretched call of Whippoorwill
And count the hours—
For only Dawn
Brings roses.
Leann, this is poetry at its finest, with a superb visual effect...a dreamy, beautiful mood, and a very personal (individual) statement from you...altogether delightful.
Gina
You are very gifted with words.
Thanks also for reading my poetry and all the sweet comments.
I have been very bad about writing and posting new poems. Sometimes we get side tracked doing other things.
Blessings,
Judith
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Who needs stars when one has roses. There's so much to be said for the simple life and the easy mannerisms that accompany it. All the gold, satin and velvet in the world can't change whom we are. The wording of your poem is so exquisite. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
very well penned Leann...
John