Excellent, Leann! Within these three lines lies an awful truth...skillfully written. Your words convey that silken allure with which the deceiver works.
Gina
Reviewed by susan abulhawa (Reader)
Reviewed on April 27, 2008
lies and silken-smooth thread...perfect! i appreciate the way you suffuse physical objects with the intangible.
Intense and thought stirring for sure, I read this several times and each time I became more impressed by the sincerity and simplicity of this piece. Very well done.
Short and to the point, but spun with perfect truth.
I, also, have a poem about deceit... entitled Honey...mine is longer, but it talks about those sticky silky threads just the same. :~)
A people’s heart can be found in their poetic words. In history men and women have stood firmly upon their soapboxes and street corners, rallying the deepest beliefs of people to rise up and be heard. The poetrypages.com has offered that voice a new
This book represents a thirty-day period of my poetry journal. Each poem addresses
the dominant thoughts occupying my mind during the early morning hours of a given
day.
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Be always safe,
Karen
I, also, have a poem about deceit... entitled Honey...mine is longer, but it talks about those sticky silky threads just the same. :~)
Cryssa