Leann
I picture this write a sight which caught your eye...Then I think to myself the journey of this womans life...the stories she could tell. I really enjoyed this one.
Perhaps the leopard print umbrella was meant to brighten the gloom? Those golden years aren't always golden. So I'm told. (lol)Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
I got the feeling that despite her age, her disability, she is a tough cookie. The image was vividly printed with words.. great job and thanks for sharing. lindalaw
Rose is right, this does read like a story or at least a mystery...where is she going, why is she out in the rain, where is her family...all questions that pop to mind with such a vivid word painting.
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fee
Each person is but a grain of sand resting beside the sea. This thought sets the tone for Jill Eisnaugle’s latest poetry collection, Beside Still Waters.
I picture this write a sight which caught your eye...Then I think to myself the journey of this womans life...the stories she could tell. I really enjoyed this one.
Perhaps the leopard print umbrella was meant to brighten the gloom? Those golden years aren't always golden. So I'm told. (lol)Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
hugs
fee
Newfie Hugs, Rose