Sun shoots through
stark naked branches.
The criss-crossed shadows
explode below like
swollen and varicosed
veins painting the road.
The path ahead of me
is bloodshot at best.
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Reviewed by Hanley Harding (Reader)
Reviewed on July 18, 2004
Dear Anne;
Such a torrent of emotion, ably expressed in so few words! VERY NICE piece of work! You're on the road to actually making me LIKE free verse (I HATE it when that happens!) Come to the RoundTable and kick it with the rest of us "inmates"... you may very well enjoy the cacophony of our collective insanities!
Doc
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Reviewed by autumn blair-strange (Reader)
Reviewed on June 13, 2004
so many wonderful layers,tight and right! you make me want more and more!!! hugs,Autumn
The Wholly Book of Exodus is humorous adult literature that features adult language, situations and content. It is the companion book of Jay Dubya's The Wholly Book of Genesis that satires the entire first book of the Bible.
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Such a torrent of emotion, ably expressed in so few words! VERY NICE piece of work! You're on the road to actually making me LIKE free verse (I HATE it when that happens!) Come to the RoundTable and kick it with the rest of us "inmates"... you may very well enjoy the cacophony of our collective insanities!
Doc
Unofficial Self-Proclaimed King of the Writers' Wrabble
(replete with a decided dearth of misguided followers!)
is bloodshot at best. < < <WOW!!! WONDERFUL write...