'Twas a blustery day pooh-who, boo-hoo, deep inside your head, as you tumbled back, ass over brain's scorched teakettle, the whistling so loud you thought only to shut it out, make it stop, the pain of feeling, like this, or so unlike yourself, and a bald eagle flew overhead, delivering the news I might again be losing, given another poor excuse for grieving which I chose to ignore, because as we often joke, there is no back door out of this place, and so a latter night, when I fed the dead, I refused you a place among them, because you remain, with or without good reason, and I thank you, my friend, for only teasing at leaving.
I agree with Candy. You have a way with words and you know how to use them. Your craft is wonderfully woven and written. As always is a delight to read your work.
Cheers
Alain
Reviewed by Candy T (Reader)
Reviewed on January 14, 2006
Fabulous to read a quality piece like this. I agree with Z's comment - and to quote Spandau Ballet (giving my age away!), 'it's only when you leave I need to love you...'
I like the imagery here: blustery day... inside your head, the teakettle bit, eagle delivering news, and "no back door out of this place" rings so true to life....
A homonymless man writes shows what it's like to look up the laid he skirts when you’re lying prone(d) to the sidewalk, beer / joint / needle dangling from your hand /lips / arm.
South Baltimore serves as the backdrop for this gripping story of three brothers leading very different lives but joined forever by the secrets of a painful family past.
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Cheers
Alain
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