Slow the F' Down (poem) by anne cunningham on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Eroica Mendoza (Reader)

Reviewed on February 18, 2003

what the f*%k??? interesting write and much more interesting comments!!! whew! :) love you anne!!

Reviewed by Charles

Reviewed on February 18, 2003

Well, gjfjkdhmnkld, at least I'm not afraid to put my name on comments, so FUCK YOU, you stupid coward!

Reviewed on February 17, 2003

It's okay to uyse any word tht fits what you need to get across. Hey even the greats made history with adjectives and verbs that fouled others. W.C.Fields said "Don't drink the water...fish fuck in it". How else would anyone recall that phrase without its punctual verb? Great write here!
Love and peace,
Susan

Reviewed by gjfjkdhmnkld

Reviewed on February 17, 2003

Youy poetry is not too bad., at least it looks like you put some effort into it. As for Charles Mc Kenzie he is a foul mouth idiot with a small vocabulary. this type think they are cool but they are actually air-heads.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on February 17, 2003

Anne,
Excellent!
Smiles
Peg

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen

Reviewed on February 17, 2003

you dont hafta if you dont wana
josie

Reviewed by anne cunningham

Reviewed on February 17, 2003

silly you guys ... i can say it, but if i don't quite say it, you can read it faster (an f' word) without having to prove you are 18 and futzing (another f' word) with the "i agree" or "disagree" buttons! :)

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)

Reviewed on February 17, 2003

you must express what is in your heart and head and not listen to the censhorship of sociatey great poemabout that excellent visuals and wonderful choice of words i though am too demure to swear like taht in my poetry so you are so brave for doing so great job

Reviewed by Charles McKenzie (Reader)

Reviewed on February 17, 2003

I agree with all: say fuck, write fuck, eat fuck and sleep fuck...FUCK censorship, especially the self-fucking kind...

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)

Reviewed on February 17, 2003

fuck, fuck, fuck, more advice: there is no room in poetry for censorship, especially from the poet herself. stanza 6 a bit dramatic, but the rest of poem quite enjoyable.

Reviewed by Aamie Burnley

Reviewed on February 17, 2003

... awww, come on anne, say fuck; those labiodentals feel sooooo good. :)

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on February 17, 2003

Anne, this poem is a marvellous presentation. What a great idea and how smoothly it flows from beginning to end.
Bill