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jigsaw sky
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jigsaw sky


you say i stole from you
and if so, may i ask
where is it that i hid
this cloud formation,
this dream you had,
of happily ever afters?


beyond our romantic,
purely ridiculous notions,
lies our unique perspective
on our futures taking shape,
yours looking like a rabbit,
mine a sleeping dog lying.


i could no more steal
the clouds from the sky
than i could the songs
that live in your heart,
for it is merely clotted anger
that has stolen your voice.


a no-win, this situation,
for who am i to say
that given the right timing
you too will find the pieces
to create the bigger picture
in the shape of your dreams.



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 Reviews of "jigsaw sky"
Reviewed by Gary Gebert
Reviewed on September 6, 2008
So happy I came back to this place to read the poetry I so longed for. Someday we should lay in the tall grass and use our child-like imaginations as the clouds sil past in the deep blueness of the sky.

g~

Reviewed by Bob Hicks
Reviewed on January 22, 2004
Past disillusionment... past hostility... past caring. A bloodless 'goodbye'(or have I missed something?). well writ.

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
Reviewed on November 28, 2003
a great write. i like the crit. thinking going on and the images you use to get your point across well done.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 27, 2003
superb write ... deep thoughts ... our dreams make us what we are ...

Reviewed by Larry Rochelle
Reviewed on November 25, 2003
If we can hold onto our dreams, even when we're confused about who we really are, then we can make progress. I like this attitude. Thanks, Lisa.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on November 25, 2003
Powerful message!

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on November 25, 2003
Excellent message. Well done. Lisa

Reviewed on November 25, 2003
(((o, anne)))

you write with style, and POWER--very vivid and intense

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla.

especially enjoyed

"...i could no more steal
the clouds from the sky
than i could the songs
that live in your heart,
for it is merely clotted anger
that has stolen your voice..."

"clotted anger"...what a line! wish i'd thought of it! *BRAVA!*

Reviewed by Helga Ross
Reviewed on November 25, 2003
I really like this a lot, Anne.
I do have one tiny problem, though, I admit, and it's mine - I strenuously object to small 'i'. ;)


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