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My Personal Sky
by Andrew Rafalski → (All Poetry by Andrew Rafalski)
  
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My personal sky beckons
it’s only a thought in a myriad
a notion inside a mirage

as
the daily things await
speckled in plastic blood
percolating on brain’s horizon
they wait on the sink
in the kitchen
punched in to-do lists
table… desk… call list… laundry room
porch… yard… garage… basement
bills… letters… calls

they do not march
but sit quietly… expanding
gnawing on my mind

I push them aside and go to
my journal and quietly write
in my personal sky
as the chores
silently
cringe
and ominously
grOW


Copyright © 2002 by Andrew Rafalski


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 Reviews of "My Personal Sky"
Reviewed by The Smoking Poet
Reviewed on August 26, 2004
Like weeds.

Yet you've found the magic in these trivial things, too. Bravo.

Reviewed by Ashraf Goreja (Reader)
Reviewed on September 11, 2003
An excellent poem. I love it.

Greetings.

Goreja.com

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on April 29, 2003
Excellent work !

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on April 27, 2003
Very Well Done Andrew!
~Nikki~

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 27, 2003
would be an interesting alternative ;) very well written!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on April 27, 2003
To be able to do that.....well done.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 27, 2003
Excellent write as always !

Reviewed by anne cunningham
Reviewed on April 27, 2003
call in merrymaids and keep scribbling in your personal sky

Reviewed by Aamie Burnley
Reviewed on April 27, 2003
... so much for your personal countertops. tell me more about that sky?

Reviewed on April 27, 2003
They do grOW! Good write on this one!

Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$

Reviewed by Jessica Stanfield (Reader)
Reviewed on April 27, 2003
This is well written and so very true! Very good job!
- J -

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
Reviewed on April 27, 2003
Andrew..
Its so good to see a write from you. I was just sitting here glaring at my own lists.. And am not sure yet who will win the stare off ;)

Excellent write..
Melanie


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