I have to admit what you say in this poem is accurate and right. But you could have added a pacing line about how long we must wait for the seemingly forever "Red lights!" Well done Steve!
First Edition Translation of Teselas by Carmen Crespo X111 César Simón Poetry Prixe 2016 Translated from Spanish by Robin Ouzman Hislop and Amparo Arrospíde
This collection of poetry addresses the nature of time, reflections on the natural world, the difficulty of loss,
contemporary social issues and gratitude for life.
I think you missed one: Pacing Patiently waiting For your hearse to arrive at your gravesite.
Ron