Trail Of A Teardrop (poem) by Melissa C. Rives on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on September 10, 2002

well done

Reviewed on August 19, 2002

I really like the rhymes in this one. And it's so true that tears need to be released. Some people might see it as a form of weakness, but most others see it for the strength it represents.

Reviewed by Sheri Plunk (Reader)

Reviewed on July 23, 2002

Yeah, make me cry cuz, hehe. This is beautiful. Wish I could write like this.

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on June 12, 2002

I can also see by the amount of comments that you have extraordinary talent. Sorry that I am going through your work so late after its posting but I had not heard of your work until I read one of your recent posts a while back. I usually do not get the opportunity to go through everyones portfolios because of time constraints but your work merits attention.

Reviewed by Robin Labenberg

Reviewed on April 28, 2002

Tears really do help release the pain within..Good writing Missy..

Reviewed by ShyPoet 1

Reviewed on April 26, 2002

Wise and profound ... well written. Love the ending stanza!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 25, 2002

A waterfall of wisdom...lovely

Reviewed by Aamie Burnley

Reviewed on April 25, 2002

... well said!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on April 25, 2002

enjoyed this....

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on April 25, 2002

Melissa this is so wonderfully written, I love your writing, Floria

Reviewed by anne cunningham

Reviewed on April 25, 2002

so true, so true ... I like the last verse, same as the first quality of this ... really captured it well ... glad to see you here. I'm still getting used to this site ... now, I'll have to come back and catch up on the rest of your posts. regards, anne

Reviewed by George MacLean Akurunwa

Reviewed on April 25, 2002

Sound truth!

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on April 25, 2002

This is so true. Tears... soldiers of the heart that's sent to battle the ache we can't take

Reviewed by Gilles

Reviewed on April 25, 2002

This is so true my friend! But the angels also call tears diamond hearts...!
Some are to hold, some are to give and some are to let go...
A very nice write!
Blue eyed fish...

Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)

Reviewed on April 25, 2002

It sure is Melissa...great write hun!

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on April 25, 2002

Beautifullly crafted. Enjoyable.

Reviewed by Tracey Hardie

Reviewed on April 25, 2002

Tears wash the soul... I enjoyed the one!